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The story was very well written, but it had nothing to do with the Avatar world! Literally in 64 chapters not a single bender was included in the story. All of the MC's friends disappear in one way or another from the novel, so this doesn't even contribute anything to the future volumes. Basically, this entire volume 1 could be summed up in a single sentence as a prologue in volume 2: "Luke grew up in the slums and enlisted in the Fire Nation army." There, that's it. The entirety of this story in a single sentence, without missing any crucial information. I feel bad to put this so bluntly since the author obviously put a lot of effort into this, but this first volume is pointless to read
Story is well build and it is not rushed in any way. Like the overal story line and would recomend it to everybody. Hope this story gose far and it is a novel with a lot of potential
Good story hope it gose a long way. Needs more chapters but its growing hope more people reeds it............................... ............................................................................................
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The writing is great overall with few grammar and spelling mistakes,but great never the less. I read this book quite late with the next two books already out so I won’t comment on the update stability. The story was a wild ride with many great twist and no holds barred, I loved it, but I won’t say anymore to avoid spoilers. This book’s best aspect is it’s world development it really fleshed out the characters and world to minimal words and trusted the audience to think for themselves to build on that with clues and story beats. All in all great beginning to this series.
The story was very well written, but it had nothing to do with the Avatar world! Literally in 64 chapters not a single bender was included in the story. All of the MC's friends disappear in one way or another from the novel, so this doesn't even contribute anything to the future volumes. Basically, this entire volume 1 could be summed up in a single sentence as a prologue in volume 2: "Luke grew up in the slums and enlisted in the Fire Nation army." There, that's it. The entirety of this story in a single sentence, without missing any crucial information. I feel bad to put this so bluntly since the author obviously put a lot of effort into this, but this first volume is pointless to read
Story is well build and it is not rushed in any way. Like the overal story line and would recomend it to everybody. Hope this story gose far and it is a novel with a lot of potential
Good story hope it gose a long way. Needs more chapters but its growing hope more people reeds it............................... ............................................................................................
I give you straight five star because I like avatar very much, and I am glad someone take it. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. A hundred and forty word is suck. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😻😻😻😻😻😻👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍🙍🙍😅💘👌👏🎉🙍😙🎇🎆🎈👍👏🎀😁😍👌💘😻🎉🎀👌🎉😻👍🙍🙌🎊🎆🎇🙍😻😅😘😙🎈👍💘👌👏👍🎀😁😍😈👿🔪💘👿💘👌 😈😍😁👌🎉🙍...... .... ... ... ... ... .. .. .. . nbhj kjv The second place is in my heart is not 📵 not sure you have any questions for a bit and see me and the beast boy is the best 🎅 best friends and the first 🌜 first firs day and night I give me to go out the window open in naruto and you know when I'm not 📵
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The writing is great overall with few grammar and spelling mistakes,but great never the less. I read this book quite late with the next two books already out so I won’t comment on the update stability. The story was a wild ride with many great twist and no holds barred, I loved it, but I won’t say anymore to avoid spoilers. This book’s best aspect is it’s world development it really fleshed out the characters and world to minimal words and trusted the audience to think for themselves to build on that with clues and story beats. All in all great beginning to this series.