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Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Seriously WN, could I just write three words that best describe how I felt? Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty
MC is a coward and everyone else is an asshole. Couldn't really relate to any character as they were all unliakable. The whole atmosphere of the novel is of "trailer trash". Not only the MC but the sect and everyone in it as well. The sect is a dump. No problem if it was funny, but it's not, at least for me. Most of the humor is the MC getting pushed around for no reason. For the 14 chapters I've read there were no fantasy elements and it was mostly a muscled woman being a sadistic jerk to the MC in order to get back at his father. Read reviews from others to see if there's fantasy at all, since I didn't want to continue. A little too many grammar mistakes as well.
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Must have while reading this novel: a huge lungs for the sake of not dying while reading the paragraphs Warning: Extreme lack of commas and periods 10/10 will die again seriously... this novel is all about wuxia/xianxia/xuanhuan trope parodies and mockery of said cliches that you usually seen/read on those type of genres the novel needs to be edited It is ridiculous to have a 140 characters to make a review... for a man of few words like me, its frustrating... hahaha 😂😂😂 140 nonsense... bla bla bla...
This story is very funny and easy to digest There is a lot of humor here and there. This story can be enjoyed casually without having to struggle to imagine the scenario. Small deficiencies such as point and coma will not interfere with the pleasure of reading it.
I reached the halfway mark so I'm giving it review. The story is pretty straightforward. I'm used to female POVs but I've read male ones before. One difference I noticed is the thought pattern. There is a reason why girls tend to overthink. They spend a lot time inside their heads. Males, on the hand, usually act on instinct. They figure things out as it happens. That difference is pretty evident in the story so it may not be everyone's cup of tea. The pacing is good. It's not too slow nor is it too fast. The characters are unique that I can say. I haven't read much that had similar characters. Again, it may not be everyone's cup of tea because it's different than the norm. I suggest working on the world building more. One second, I thought they were on Earth, the next, I thought they travelled to another world but then, I find out it's all in the same place just divided somehow. As the readers keep going, they'll be able to figure things out but more emphasis on the details in this world wouldn't hurt. I'm glad I waited until the halfway mark. Things are progressing.
Im writing a review after reading chapter 6. I understand the other reviews about comas and full stops and other marks. If its done right ill give writing quality 5⭐️ it made me laugh as i read it. Im trying to imagine this dude and his life style. He must be a funny guy and just do what he wants. Oh, and Young Three got me! Didn’t expect that. Ill continue reading it later. If you want something different, this is the book for you!
If you're looking for some fun and laughter, I suggest you read this. Personally, I like it. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
This book is kind of funny. It has it's moments but personally I didn't get the plot that much. I wasn't able to get myself emersed into the world of character.
Hilarious read. The author gives a very vibrant yet comedic picture of the world of Joe, our main character. Bit of a suprise come Chapter two. The banter between characters is witty and sharp. Definately a must read! I can't wait to see how the rest of the novel pans out.
Thus far it seems interesting. I would say the main goal is to be subversive in the context of cultivation. The characters are interesting and human if a bit insane.But then again people who would cultivate are a bit insane.
Hillarious. The writing style is amazing and going through each chapter will make you laugh something like a sock or head off. If you love comedy, then this is the novel for you. Join Joe's adventures in an unorthodox wuxia or fantasy novel, whichever it may be. Keep it up author! >3</ (Can't edit my review, so I deleted it and made a new one. 4.8 until an editor appears)
A comedy special, that is the only I can describe this novel. Honestly, I don't even understand how our MC (Joe) can survive this and still stick to being a slacker. In terms of writing quality its up there and the fact, the authour is managing to stay consistent is worthy of praise. Oh, and one of my favourite lines so far "Digging my grave First Sergeant. Next time this recruit dies just let the recruit stay dead." This nearly killed me. Highly recommend if you are especially looking for a laugh and if not put it in your library. So, when you are looking for a laugh, read it.
Very interesting story. Compared to the traditional cultivation and sect novels, this story has its own unique format. The lead character, Joe, is much more laid back and relateable, while the side characters are very interesting and are highlighted with roles (rather than only appearing for a brief moment). Aside from some grammar mistakes and lack of commas, it’s a very interesting story and definitely earns its name in originality and creativity.
No spoilers here. (Review from chap 20+) So I thought it would be similar to other types of wuxia or martial art novels. But I was damn wrong😂 Would consider this a breath of fresh air. Having an Mc who is not all about piercing the heavens or becoming god all the time makes quite the funny thing to read after a while. But even though this novel gave me a good chuckle and a deep laugh, it lacked something. Author, you need to add more of the 'cultivation' themes usually depicted in novels of the same genre's, as it is this which truly makes them stand out. Don't get me wrong, mc is a plus, and I love his original character and the well written story. But you would most definitely come much further with some more plot! ;) this is definitely a good start, and I can see you are very dedicated to your work. Hope to see more from you! Grammar is good, and I didn't break out of immersion too often when reading. You should focus more on having more depth in.each chapter, instead of posting short ones. It will be much more rewarding! (Short chapters are also good, but make sure you also whip them in shape!) Also, author, if you read this then I highly advice you to get a cover photo! :) Will give you a 4.4/5 But Joe is as shameless as myself, so heres a 5/5. All the best! ;)
Joe, literally a real example of slacker alright, he needed to get smack first so he could move (to do something). A lot of swore words and some actions where it made the story entertaining. For me, it was fun to see him suffer. Maybe that's what comedic things about it. Love Young Three, that character was the best for me. Keep going, the story would be complete if you have a cover book in it haha.
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Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Seriously WN, could I just write three words that best describe how I felt? Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty Hilarious. Entertaining. Witty
MC is a coward and everyone else is an asshole. Couldn't really relate to any character as they were all unliakable. The whole atmosphere of the novel is of "trailer trash". Not only the MC but the sect and everyone in it as well. The sect is a dump. No problem if it was funny, but it's not, at least for me. Most of the humor is the MC getting pushed around for no reason. For the 14 chapters I've read there were no fantasy elements and it was mostly a muscled woman being a sadistic jerk to the MC in order to get back at his father. Read reviews from others to see if there's fantasy at all, since I didn't want to continue. A little too many grammar mistakes as well.
I feel strange reading this.....yyyyyyyyyyyyyyy6yyyyyyyyyyyy6yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy6yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy6yyyyyyyyyyy shhshs sjs djsjhs shs s. Shs shs shs sjjd dj fjd dka ajs sjs djd diebeiw wjs djd djd djd sjw wjq aje dkw sjs djd sjs djs diebwkd djd rkf fkfbfjrknd eje eks djd ejw djdbsjd djx xhsbajs. Shwjskkskndks skkwskn sjkk
Must have while reading this novel: a huge lungs for the sake of not dying while reading the paragraphs Warning: Extreme lack of commas and periods 10/10 will die again seriously... this novel is all about wuxia/xianxia/xuanhuan trope parodies and mockery of said cliches that you usually seen/read on those type of genres the novel needs to be edited It is ridiculous to have a 140 characters to make a review... for a man of few words like me, its frustrating... hahaha 😂😂😂 140 nonsense... bla bla bla...
This story is very funny and easy to digest There is a lot of humor here and there. This story can be enjoyed casually without having to struggle to imagine the scenario. Small deficiencies such as point and coma will not interfere with the pleasure of reading it.
I reached the halfway mark so I'm giving it review. The story is pretty straightforward. I'm used to female POVs but I've read male ones before. One difference I noticed is the thought pattern. There is a reason why girls tend to overthink. They spend a lot time inside their heads. Males, on the hand, usually act on instinct. They figure things out as it happens. That difference is pretty evident in the story so it may not be everyone's cup of tea. The pacing is good. It's not too slow nor is it too fast. The characters are unique that I can say. I haven't read much that had similar characters. Again, it may not be everyone's cup of tea because it's different than the norm. I suggest working on the world building more. One second, I thought they were on Earth, the next, I thought they travelled to another world but then, I find out it's all in the same place just divided somehow. As the readers keep going, they'll be able to figure things out but more emphasis on the details in this world wouldn't hurt. I'm glad I waited until the halfway mark. Things are progressing.
Im writing a review after reading chapter 6. I understand the other reviews about comas and full stops and other marks. If its done right ill give writing quality 5⭐️ it made me laugh as i read it. Im trying to imagine this dude and his life style. He must be a funny guy and just do what he wants. Oh, and Young Three got me! Didn’t expect that. Ill continue reading it later. If you want something different, this is the book for you!
If you're looking for some fun and laughter, I suggest you read this. Personally, I like it. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
This book is kind of funny. It has it's moments but personally I didn't get the plot that much. I wasn't able to get myself emersed into the world of character.
Hilarious read. The author gives a very vibrant yet comedic picture of the world of Joe, our main character. Bit of a suprise come Chapter two. The banter between characters is witty and sharp. Definately a must read! I can't wait to see how the rest of the novel pans out.
Thus far it seems interesting. I would say the main goal is to be subversive in the context of cultivation. The characters are interesting and human if a bit insane.But then again people who would cultivate are a bit insane.
Hillarious. The writing style is amazing and going through each chapter will make you laugh something like a sock or head off. If you love comedy, then this is the novel for you. Join Joe's adventures in an unorthodox wuxia or fantasy novel, whichever it may be. Keep it up author! >3</ (Can't edit my review, so I deleted it and made a new one. 4.8 until an editor appears)
A comedy special, that is the only I can describe this novel. Honestly, I don't even understand how our MC (Joe) can survive this and still stick to being a slacker. In terms of writing quality its up there and the fact, the authour is managing to stay consistent is worthy of praise. Oh, and one of my favourite lines so far "Digging my grave First Sergeant. Next time this recruit dies just let the recruit stay dead." This nearly killed me. Highly recommend if you are especially looking for a laugh and if not put it in your library. So, when you are looking for a laugh, read it.
Very interesting story. Compared to the traditional cultivation and sect novels, this story has its own unique format. The lead character, Joe, is much more laid back and relateable, while the side characters are very interesting and are highlighted with roles (rather than only appearing for a brief moment). Aside from some grammar mistakes and lack of commas, it’s a very interesting story and definitely earns its name in originality and creativity.
No spoilers here. (Review from chap 20+) So I thought it would be similar to other types of wuxia or martial art novels. But I was damn wrong😂 Would consider this a breath of fresh air. Having an Mc who is not all about piercing the heavens or becoming god all the time makes quite the funny thing to read after a while. But even though this novel gave me a good chuckle and a deep laugh, it lacked something. Author, you need to add more of the 'cultivation' themes usually depicted in novels of the same genre's, as it is this which truly makes them stand out. Don't get me wrong, mc is a plus, and I love his original character and the well written story. But you would most definitely come much further with some more plot! ;) this is definitely a good start, and I can see you are very dedicated to your work. Hope to see more from you! Grammar is good, and I didn't break out of immersion too often when reading. You should focus more on having more depth in.each chapter, instead of posting short ones. It will be much more rewarding! (Short chapters are also good, but make sure you also whip them in shape!) Also, author, if you read this then I highly advice you to get a cover photo! :) Will give you a 4.4/5 But Joe is as shameless as myself, so heres a 5/5. All the best! ;)
Joe, literally a real example of slacker alright, he needed to get smack first so he could move (to do something). A lot of swore words and some actions where it made the story entertaining. For me, it was fun to see him suffer. Maybe that's what comedic things about it. Love Young Three, that character was the best for me. Keep going, the story would be complete if you have a cover book in it haha.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.