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Grammar needs some work. I don't know what is going on for half of the chapters with no background beforehand and little timer skips every single chapter. Like bruh, how am I supposed to follow along with this?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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I see tags in 0th chapter I rate 5 stars.... Well time to actually read this ****.. let's go bois Llalalalalalalalalalalalaalalalalallalalallalalalallalalalalalalal
I myself wrote.so full stars and i will try my very best. This is a cultivation in modern world novel. There will be fun. Danger. Thrill . No fully cultivation will be given so that audience may be bored also suggestions are open. Many people are going to love it if you stick to the novel I mean it. Also many girls will be in the harem so please remember the girls names especially well. There will be bad jokes.....
Nice story so far, I hope there will be no tragedy happening in the future, also don't drop it, please.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Grammar needs some work. I don't know what is going on for half of the chapters with no background beforehand and little timer skips every single chapter. Like bruh, how am I supposed to follow along with this?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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More more more more ore more more more more more more more more more more more more more ore more more more more more more ore more more more more more more ore more more more more more more ore more more more more more more ore more more more more more more ore more more more
this **** is trashhh. makes no fucking sense. trash story line.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I see tags in 0th chapter I rate 5 stars.... Well time to actually read this ****.. let's go bois Llalalalalalalalalalalalaalalalalallalalallalalalallalalalalalalal
I myself wrote.so full stars and i will try my very best. This is a cultivation in modern world novel. There will be fun. Danger. Thrill . No fully cultivation will be given so that audience may be bored also suggestions are open. Many people are going to love it if you stick to the novel I mean it. Also many girls will be in the harem so please remember the girls names especially well. There will be bad jokes.....
Nice story so far, I hope there will be no tragedy happening in the future, also don't drop it, please.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.