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This novel needs a #Second Chance tag. I am enjoying this novel a lot. No matter how many apocalypse/harem novels where the MC fights to gain recognition of future bros and girlfriends, I always continue to enjoy it. ~ Keep it up!
It’s an alright story. I am just wondering if you are ever going to write more of it. I’d greatly appreciate it if you could tell me if you are or not.
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Overall, it's a pretty good book. I'm enjoying how the main character is starting change in personality due to his abilities, but I'll be 100% honest when I say I dislike all the mc's "wives" they don't think, and they're written in a way this is only ever useful or effective in the story during certain events. We haven't heard anything about what the people that were accepted into their fortress are doing. Are they just lazing around? Or are they actually working. It would have been smart of them to start farming to help upkeep their supplies, because there's no guarantee that their supplies will last as long as they're estimating. I'd say I rated it only a bit higher than my initial intention only because I'd love to see this story do better. The end it I have one request: Please for the love of God have the MC think further than sex. Aye he's the Sin of Greed, but there's more to be greedy about than sex and power. And he wasn't always Greed either, so he should fully be capable of thinking beyond sex at least, and it's shown occasionally but not enough to overhaul the occasions that he's ALWAYS around those girls that are also ALWAYS thinking about sex.
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Hi, I'm new here if someone would recommend something good to read because I'm bored xD so send recommendations or kill them v: Thanks for stopping to see my review and if you didn't see it, it doesn't matter: 3
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The story background is solid, character development is balanced, writing quality is also good but the chapter updates are the biggest disappointment!!
This is a really great story but since it hasn't been updated in like 4 months it seems like it has been dropped. I hope it hasn't and the author will start updating again.
In my opinion the novel is really confusing and the mc's character is not really good the grammar is good but really confusing😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
Só esperando que a história vou-te . Ele é muito boa .parece ter futuro .😉😍😍,........................................ ..... .....
Good read I thoroughly enjoyed it Exp 6262)3):7:$2$$:7:$:!:7:73!:&:&:&:’sjudhejeusneududhhJjhsjejzu$:7373$$47464$7;7;$4$:874$,$:7:77/7(^^)まなたりあはたらたらはまろまらたらはまはまりたらまはdhehebdjhdedujdjrjrjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjhhrj
In a world overrun with zombies and the wickedness of men, a young boy meets an unfair death after accidentally aquiaring an unknown treasure. With his soul carrying strong resentment and unwillingness to end things just like that, his soul comes in contact with a system which pairs him up and combines him with another soul which just about left it's body and shares stong resentments with the former soul. Haro-kun awakens with the experience of his former life and the present one a few weeks before the world meets it's end, with the help of his system he begins to increase his strength and prepare for the upcoming catastrophe. He vows to get revenge for the both souls deaths and protect everything he previously couldn't. He will fight incarnated and evolved in other to protect his own and hopefully return the world to stability, to do this he must fully embrace the deadly sin : Greed. It's a really nice book, it contains a stable background, the character development is also really good(currently no Phantom characters). The story manages to move into the scenes quite smoothly allowing the reader to follow quite well. Although the interpreter made some errors with the pronouns, sometimes interchanging 'her' for 'him' and so on but these slight errors are quite negligible. Unfortunately I don't know the grading system for web novel so I'll have to end my assessment here. I hope this review proved helpful🤗
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Interesting piece of work. Like the idea of nfk. Nsfw is too mainstream. Also good smut. Good characters. Exp man. Exp Ez.
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good one but it could be more perfect if you could give 1 chpter per day.......................keep it up.............thnk for the hard work
pure garbage so you're telling me his old self and his new self are interconnected sometimes they all just know each other.
brinh out the slave option give it a good chpter one.....ohyea..owesome..interesting keep it up....dont drop it....n if you could just 2 chpter a day if you could....
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interesting novel very interesting keep it up just want you know i really like this novel about the plot about the R18 n other Great....dont drop it half way please.......................
based on the tag and sypnosis ... ill rate this 5 .. . . and ill be reading this now, hope it will be awesome 😍😍😍 . . and here is one of the "man of culture" guy coming in 😏😏😏
I stop reading this because the MC will save some strangers to his base camp, it will be men and women. If he only saved women maybe i could reconsider spending my time to read this. Anna adopted mother was already 37 years old and she still love MC's father, i don't know how many times maybe she had been gangbanged. If I modified the story I would not take Anna's adopted mother, or I would create something from the system that can purify women making them younger and virgin again
Tiết lộ Spoiler keep it up with the chapter dont drop it if you could n keep updating chpter so we dont get boring hahaha....................................
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This novel needs a #Second Chance tag. I am enjoying this novel a lot. No matter how many apocalypse/harem novels where the MC fights to gain recognition of future bros and girlfriends, I always continue to enjoy it. ~ Keep it up!
It’s an alright story. I am just wondering if you are ever going to write more of it. I’d greatly appreciate it if you could tell me if you are or not.
Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar. Believe you?...what a liar.
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Overall, it's a pretty good book. I'm enjoying how the main character is starting change in personality due to his abilities, but I'll be 100% honest when I say I dislike all the mc's "wives" they don't think, and they're written in a way this is only ever useful or effective in the story during certain events. We haven't heard anything about what the people that were accepted into their fortress are doing. Are they just lazing around? Or are they actually working. It would have been smart of them to start farming to help upkeep their supplies, because there's no guarantee that their supplies will last as long as they're estimating. I'd say I rated it only a bit higher than my initial intention only because I'd love to see this story do better. The end it I have one request: Please for the love of God have the MC think further than sex. Aye he's the Sin of Greed, but there's more to be greedy about than sex and power. And he wasn't always Greed either, so he should fully be capable of thinking beyond sex at least, and it's shown occasionally but not enough to overhaul the occasions that he's ALWAYS around those girls that are also ALWAYS thinking about sex.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hi, I'm new here if someone would recommend something good to read because I'm bored xD so send recommendations or kill them v: Thanks for stopping to see my review and if you didn't see it, it doesn't matter: 3
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The story background is solid, character development is balanced, writing quality is also good but the chapter updates are the biggest disappointment!!
This is a really great story but since it hasn't been updated in like 4 months it seems like it has been dropped. I hope it hasn't and the author will start updating again.
In my opinion the novel is really confusing and the mc's character is not really good the grammar is good but really confusing😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
Só esperando que a história vou-te . Ele é muito boa .parece ter futuro .😉😍😍,........................................ ..... .....
Good read I thoroughly enjoyed it Exp 6262)3):7:$2$$:7:$:!:7:73!:&:&:&:’sjudhejeusneududhhJjhsjejzu$:7373$$47464$7;7;$4$:874$,$:7:77/7(^^)まなたりあはたらたらはまろまらたらはまはまりたらまはdhehebdjhdedujdjrjrjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjhhrj
In a world overrun with zombies and the wickedness of men, a young boy meets an unfair death after accidentally aquiaring an unknown treasure. With his soul carrying strong resentment and unwillingness to end things just like that, his soul comes in contact with a system which pairs him up and combines him with another soul which just about left it's body and shares stong resentments with the former soul. Haro-kun awakens with the experience of his former life and the present one a few weeks before the world meets it's end, with the help of his system he begins to increase his strength and prepare for the upcoming catastrophe. He vows to get revenge for the both souls deaths and protect everything he previously couldn't. He will fight incarnated and evolved in other to protect his own and hopefully return the world to stability, to do this he must fully embrace the deadly sin : Greed. It's a really nice book, it contains a stable background, the character development is also really good(currently no Phantom characters). The story manages to move into the scenes quite smoothly allowing the reader to follow quite well. Although the interpreter made some errors with the pronouns, sometimes interchanging 'her' for 'him' and so on but these slight errors are quite negligible. Unfortunately I don't know the grading system for web novel so I'll have to end my assessment here. I hope this review proved helpful🤗
Tiết lộ Spoiler Interesting piece of work. Like the idea of nfk. Nsfw is too mainstream. Also good smut. Good characters. Exp man. Exp Ez.
e uma boa historia gosto dos desenvouvimento ,.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler good one but it could be more perfect if you could give 1 chpter per day.......................keep it up.............thnk for the hard work
pure garbage so you're telling me his old self and his new self are interconnected sometimes they all just know each other.
brinh out the slave option give it a good chpter one.....ohyea..owesome..interesting keep it up....dont drop it....n if you could just 2 chpter a day if you could....
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interesting novel very interesting keep it up just want you know i really like this novel about the plot about the R18 n other Great....dont drop it half way please.......................
based on the tag and sypnosis ... ill rate this 5 .. . . and ill be reading this now, hope it will be awesome 😍😍😍 . . and here is one of the "man of culture" guy coming in 😏😏😏
I stop reading this because the MC will save some strangers to his base camp, it will be men and women. If he only saved women maybe i could reconsider spending my time to read this. Anna adopted mother was already 37 years old and she still love MC's father, i don't know how many times maybe she had been gangbanged. If I modified the story I would not take Anna's adopted mother, or I would create something from the system that can purify women making them younger and virgin again
Tiết lộ Spoiler keep it up with the chapter dont drop it if you could n keep updating chpter so we dont get boring hahaha....................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.