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This novel has been dropped. It was my first time writing and I made some bad mistakes. Not going to delete it as it is part of my journey as a writer. If you are still interested the synopsis is as follows.

Lucas is an orphan who worked hard to achieve good grades. But before he could realize his dream, he died... However, a God "invites" him to another world where magic is used and gives him a system!

Can Lucas reclaim his former dreams but in another world?

Can Lucas become the strongest despite being different from the rest of the population?

Check out my newest novel, The Strongest Clan.

Join Lucas on his road to becoming the Black God of Lightning!

My patreon if you want to support me for my work https://www.patreon.com/lazareth

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Lazareth

This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this. But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw. Please like this so people can see this first.

5yr
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VOLATILE_EVOLUTION

I like it hope he gets more op later on. Do you like traps?” “Yes” “Would you bang a trap?” “Depends” “Are traps, in fact, male?” “Yes” “Then you’re gay” “No I’m not” “You just said you would bang a trap!” “But I’m not gay tho”

5yr
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Hahadavis

Coward Mc, not even willing to fight for his first love is his second live 😑🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

5yr
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Kurosis

everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular. rated 3.4* Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)

5yr
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afosh
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I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...

5yr
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chghaith

A hidden Gem . it's a well written story i like very much . A must read. a must read .a must read. a must read . a must read .a must read dqkspdkàidfs;kdofk;fdo;fgok;fskd

5yr
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deutscherdrachen

A well writen story. The characters are done extremely well and background scenerio is well thought out................................................

5yr
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DarKing93

So far so good nothing to complain about the story hopefully he starts practicing lightning related spells soon its my favorite element Keep up the good work hoping for a update soon as possible

5yr
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TheReviewer

So far I absolutely love the story. I have been waiting for a more western light novel and I am hoping that you can give this to me. But so far so good ;).

5yr
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zd4zaaa

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
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ZeD_OnE

I liked the characters of this story. but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events. otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence. I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.

5yr
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Frame
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Lovely! I can't get enough this. Although it started slow. The pacing is good. The character's feel real. Especially Lucas. I love how you have portrayed him. It's very real and authentic. Especially the way you write his inner dialogue. As a fan of lightning I'm hoping to see that soon but I'm loving your story. Please don't drop this precious work of art. And to those that are reading this. If you were hoping to gain some type of spoiler. I'm sorry but you going to have to read it yourself. Sorry not sorry. As you will love it😂😁. Youfan out (If you read the novel you will understand what this means)

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5yr
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BorderlineAnorexic

I'm on board with a story if their mc has lighting powers. Always been a fan of it. Having an mc that's a different nationality other than Asian is a bonus. Webnovel needs more diversity. If you see the author see this, keep up the good work!

5yr
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JewelJestercrystal

Love the story so far. Been enjoying it. Stable updates and if a day is missed a double is released the next day.I love the concept of the world and how you have used science to explain certain things. It makes it a lot more realistic. The MC seems to have a plan and follows, there is always a logical reason for his each and every action. Smart Mc and smart Author. There are often some grammar issues but it is not off putting. I believe in the potential of this story and I'm just here to voice(write) my appreciation. Please continue to write don't ever lose hope. Ps: I added this book to my library if that wasn't already implied.

5yr
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Chapter 71: Adversity 5 years ago

Âm lượng 1

  1. 1
    A hard goodbye 5 years ago
  2. 2
    Love at first sight? 5 years ago
  3. 3
    Ignorance is bliss 5 years ago
  4. 4
    Newtons first law dammit! 5 years ago
  5. 5
    " I'm in some intermediatory place between Heaven, Hell and Earth? 5 years ago
  6. 6
    Three blessings and a unique skill! 5 years ago
  7. 7
    A skin defect ? 5 years ago
  8. 8
    A tribute to fallen dreams 5 years ago
  9. 9
    Lucas Lightningstorm's base stats. 5 years ago
  10. 10
    Rules of this world 5 years ago
  11. 11
    Combat 5 years ago
  12. 12
    System level 2! 5 years ago
  13. 13
    Scheming? 5 years ago
  14. 14
    New Spell! 5 years ago
  15. 15
    Evolution 5 years ago
  16. 16
    Treasure 5 years ago
  17. 17
    "It was only a glimpse." 5 years ago
  18. 18
    The scheme unfolds 5 years ago
  19. 19
    Apple of longevity 5 years ago
  20. 20
    Lucas makes his move 5 years ago
  21. 21
    "I couldn't have taken her to a less secluded, less rapey place" 5 years ago
  22. 22
    "Bonzai for being weak!" 5 years ago
  23. 23
    The forest of Talem 5 years ago
  24. 24
    A tongue sharper than a demon dagger 5 years ago
  25. 25
    2 choices 5 years ago
  26. 26
    Training (1) 5 years ago
  27. 27
    Training (2) 5 years ago
  28. 28
    Training (3) 5 years ago
  29. 29
    Training (4) 5 years ago
  30. 30
    Training (5) 5 years ago
  31. 31
    Training (6) 5 years ago
  32. 32
    Training (7) 5 years ago
  33. 33
    Training(8) 5 years ago
  34. 34
    Systems level 3's perks. 5 years ago
  35. 35
    The black cave 5 years ago
  36. 36
    Anime in real life 5 years ago
  37. 37
    The final beer 5 years ago
  38. 38
    Goodbye 5 years ago
  39. 39
    " Get out of my way!" 5 years ago
  40. 40
    The letter 5 years ago
  41. 41
    The Grand hall 5 years ago
  42. 42
    Test 1 5 years ago
  43. 43
    Modern day society ? 5 years ago
  44. 44
    The truth 5 years ago
  45. 45
    Test 2 5 years ago
  46. 46
    The dorms 5 years ago
  47. 47
    The Training Area 5 years ago
  48. 48
    Profit or loss? 5 years ago
  49. 49
    Quest? 5 years ago
  50. 50
    Test 3 (1) 5 years ago
  51. 51
    Test 3 (2) 5 years ago
  52. 52
    Test 3 (3) 5 years ago
  53. 53
    Test 3 (4) 5 years ago
  54. 54
    Test 3 (5) 5 years ago
  55. 55
    Test 3 (6) 5 years ago
  56. 56
    Test 3 (7) 5 years ago
  57. 57
    Test 3 (8) 5 years ago
  58. 58
    Test 3 (9) 5 years ago
  59. 59
    Test 3 (10) 5 years ago
  60. 60
    Test 3 (11) 5 years ago
  61. 61
    Grand ceremony. 5 years ago
  62. 62
    The bet 5 years ago
  63. 63
    Late? 5 years ago
  64. 64
    First day 5 years ago
  65. 65
    Another bet. 5 years ago
  66. 66
    Perseverance 5 years ago
  67. 67
    Skip Test A 5 years ago
  68. 68
    Skip Test B 5 years ago
  69. 69
    The demon dagger returns 5 years ago
  70. 70
    Crippling strength 5 years ago
  71. 71
    Adversity 5 years ago

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