1000 Planetary Realms

LV 4

HaremDao

This story has alot of potential it has some elements monster paradise where the cultivation levels start out as metals and it takes life force from killed enemies to level up and his system does the same MP gold finger where to get skills he must get pieces of that skill by using it till he gets it and upgrades it the same way. Writing: i give it a 2/5 because it have some misspelling but the biggest downer would be the grammar it completely kills the immersion of the story. I like stories with good immersion soo. Stability of updates: idk just read it today so ill give it a 4/5 till i see how long it takes between updates. Story development: honestly i like the direction the story is going but it feels like it heading that way in a jet instead of taking their time to explain more and give more foundation for future details. I like monster paradise so ill have some hopes for this so ill give it a 3/5 because its super shaky at the moment anything push this up or down. Character design: we really don’t know much about anyone since like i said the beginning was rush to the extreme the character feel like piece of paper not to much depth it just feels like their there and nothing else.2/5 was going to give it a 1/5 but pushed it to 2 to show the author that I appreciate their attempt at character building. World building: well we did get that their is cultivation in this world and the sort of money that gets used but we dont know of how this world runs is their a police,mayor, any politics? 3/5 Over all i feel this novel has a-lot of potential but it seems like the author likes rushing his/her novels which causes their quality it to completely downgrade from it being awesome 😎 to just e***😣. Don’t forget this is My review, if you don’t agree with me then just write your own review and explain your pros and cons after all we all have different like and dislikes. my advice would be to slowly build up your character story and background so gives you enough time to all develop the world around him doing this will also help the side character get more time to get developed. also for your grammar try GRAMMARLY it has a free and premium i used the free version when i used to write my essays it was super helpful. Ps: i will update my review if their are any re edits to the story.

LV 13

zZCandyZz

Thk for the chapter. Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................