Magician of Ice element

LV 11

CopenhagenF5

My rating breakdown: 3/3/4/4/4 overall 3.6 Writing: 3 lots of grammar mistakes/ word phrases that needs to be rearranged to make sense Punctuation is ok Use free tools to fix grammar Update: 3 Avg update time ~5 days ish (also holidays) not surprising, hopes author will not drop .... Chapters are nice and long Story: 4 Character: 4 World: 4 Writing quality effects story char and world Even though ok grammar, still understandable, takes time to reword, but understandable. Author took the time to describe the story, characters, background, and build a world to encapsulate the plot Good novel to read Reminds me of couple certain manga with Mc/ chats with bushy tails xd

LV 7

Anwe

There are some grammar errors here and there so i suggest to use grammarly since it is a free app and it can get rid of most of the errors. I like the idea even though it is still not to far into the story. I hope you continue without getting discouraged.

LV 1

rebecca_ringdom

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