The CEO's Painted Skin

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XOMatsumaeohana

With a title like this, I wasn't expecting smut. I was going to break this review down on writing Quality etc. But I need to point out a flaw in this plot. I don't see what the two have as romance right now. Instead, all I see is 'lust' and 'desire.' that's a common theme that's found on WN. So that's fine. But I don't think Caroline or John realize that there are no actual feelings of 'love' Maybe you can add this in and in the future a more genuine romance can be built between them. Writing Quality: There's a few issued, but nothing that can't be fixed with a writing program like Grammarly or prowriting aid. Character Design: Contrary to the present plot line, the characters are developed - though John's story is still vague for now. I'm guessing this was done deliberately. We learn a lot about Caroline's situation from the very beginning. So it's easy to understand what sort of personality she has Story Development: Right now I'm unsure of where the plot is going. But I'm guessing John will chose to go after her and Caroline will think more about her feelings for John. Or maybe they could spend much longer apart from each other. You could have them meet again when they are much older, maybe a year time skip? Overall: This is my first time reading this type of story. I hope I was able to give you some good advice. And keep up the good work!!

LV 4

90751052

Do you like smutty fluffy romance with a bit of mint? Well, this is a great novel to make you feel happy once you get past the er, r a p e with ML and FL. Interesting how the author decided to switch from an innocent romance to a domineering CEO one. Yup, CEO. Grammar mistakes are there, but it's a major improvement from her other book. Good start, and keep it up, Author! >3</

LV 11

31Desember19

I learn alot from the writer especially how to keep calm in a very complicated moment. Chaterine is still 20 but due to her family condition she becomes mature quickly. Even though in a real life such kind of character is rarely found. I myself keep surprise by the plots developed ..it seems that Chaterine enjoys her life..At the beginning of the story being raped is something horrible but the way the writer develops John'character is unique.. John'character makes him get a title a good rapper????I think

LV 5

moonface07

I am just starting to read this novel and i like the story. Really worth to read..😍😍 I like john and catherine they has a unique love story how they end up together.. Good job author! Keep it up😘😘

LV 15

Senku_Gen

So far the story seems interesting. I quite like the ML after I discovered his past. But, I dislike the FL for her ignorance and 'play hard to get' attitude. It's irritating to read the novel everytime she 'confuse'.

LV 6

Melane122

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LV 14

Missrealitybites

I read this novel from the beginning to the end. Sometimes I would become frustrated but I keep reading because the story is gripping, and yes... it's controversial. The lemons (smut scenes) are so satisfying and reading this was my guilty pleasure for months! The book has a CEO in the title, but it's not really cliche as it is set in the Philippines (other books are usually in some unknown countries or in China) and it's quite refreshing. It still has an evil (twin not step) sister though. Ugh, I hate the sister so much.

LV 6

Saran83

Joseph have a deep grudged rooted in his heart toward John. He cant let John lead a happy life. John also in the wrong for what happen in the past. Why dont you just apologize, John. Dont look down on Joseph. The more you look down on him, the more he resent you in his heart...

LV 5

orym

Is he real this John ready to became a saint. So much temptation frustrated still awaiting Catherine it's unbelievable I am surprised at his great character woah

LV 6

JenNi83

Now we have news about Cath. When will she can reunited with John and baby James? What the motive of kidnapper? They didnt hurt her physically, yet didnt demand ransom from John. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

LV 6

wizardess00000000

I really like this novel. M very excited to go further and read more. I want what happen between FL and ML at the end...n please keep on updating more chapter.

LV 6

Saran83

First, i thaught Cath is too irresponsible.. She's not mature enough, well, thats the fact. John, in the other hand love her so much. Even though he are too possessive toward Cath, but that is bcoz he love her. He always forgive her again & again when Cath abandoned him... But, everything is meaningless, when one man cannot resist the temptation, especially WOMAN. no matter how much he love Cath, on the time when he touch other woman, his love become worthless..no value..

LV 5

madjing

They say's, reading this novel is fun . wow hope this story wake me up.... In a couple of minutes.....soò sleepy... I've having fun reading a novel But sometimes it pissed me..... Internet soo slow....damn Oh well im just using a data. But sttill I pay for it.

LV 6

igue

Thanks author this chapter's were explicitly written the grammar the scene and the characters are very alright. Thanks please can we adjustment be made on the characters coming in

LV 6

fmclear

I just found this novel and added to my library and I'm liking the story. Story is good and I like the characters. Five stars for this. Thanks for sharing this author. God Bless

LV 4

Knossos

This novel has some awkward wording, small things really. No real spelling errors. Decent dialogue and creativity. I will definitely be keeping my eyes on this story!

LV 5

swetaingle

I love your story john is very cute and loveable person I am crazy for the novel so please continue All characters are well plotted and Starting is good

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caitycaity

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