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In Earth,southeast asia,Burma republic nation,at May Town,normal guy working as a monk for 8 days with a boring life died at night during sleep,painless death.His soul is collected be a only remaining Goddess of moon. MC:where am I? He is currently at a room with ancient decoration. Goddess:hello,Wunna,Im a sole Goddess of All Universe. Wunna:Oh,You are a Goddes?So where are the other Gods?Why am I here? Goddess:You are dead during sleep and I called you because Im a lonely God and bore to dead and I called you because I want you accesend into Godhood.I need a partner or husband for coming eternity.But I cannt make you a God now,I dont have enough power for that.You have to achieve in mortal world,so I will send you to parallel Earth with some Immortal gifts.About other Gods,millions years ago,A war break out and all the gods including Olympians,Asgards and Jade palace died due to supreme destruction wepon and I was lucky due to visiting at mortal realms.So Im the lonly one now.I choose you to be my Husband because you never **** a virgin and only prostitutes and whores.So I pity you and you have good deeds by not committing any crimes.Then Im a Virgin Goddes,I will await you until you become a god.Satisfied now,future hubby? Wunna:wow,thats awesome.Ok,I will become a god,so send me into low realm. Goddess:I can give you ,immortality, not a weapon or thing in that world can bleed you,you will be forever young and Strength of a hundred men,speed of the fallen star,can teleport within a thousand miles and character creation.But you have to become a god before that world aged and destroyed by comprehending laws and emotions,you can do whatever you want in that world.Enjoy the funs,dont forget that Im waiting yiu,love.Now create your body. Wunna:thanks you,honey.I need six ** ab,6 ft 2in tall,white skin,face of Damon of Devil may cry game. Goddess:Granted,I will send you into that world, have funs.bye. Wunna:hahha,thanks sweethear In a forest, suddenly a space rip appear and a man was walking off.He is tall and white skin ,muscular slim body and black short hairs and blue eyes.He is wearing a V shaped neck black T-shirt ,Long cotton black coat,black fit pant,military boots,A sword looks like one in Lord of the rings movie which is mc king's sword.Sword is silver colour similar cross-guard. Wunna:Wow,here Iam with awesome physiqe and powers.hahahha.I need to know where am I and where is nearest town.I will teleport into next 500 miles to the west. Suddenly,3D door appear near a city,a man walk off.Ohh,I see a city now,I will explore and get intel and time to have funs. 4 horse pulling carriage was moving in a road lead to the Paris, and 20 knights are escorting it.In the carriage,a princess was sitting with 2maids. Elena,maid:Princess-sama,we are arriving soon.The king will be very happy to see you.You are the only daughter. Princess Catherine:I really miss my parents. Suddenly the carriage stop,a knight is knotting in the window. Knight:your highness,a man is stopping our carriage looks like a bandid with weired clothes.Should we kill or catch him? Princess:just catch him that stupid peasant.Dont bother with small matter. Knight cap:hey peasant, move away or die. Wunna:I just want to talk and you want me die,you mere mortal,kneel or disperse. kmight cap:just beat him to dead my guys. 2knights with shining silver armor came forward and they punch at him and their hands cracked . 2 knights screamed. Wunna came forward and beat the whole 20 knights like bullying.Wunna came to the carriage and open the door.He see 3 beauties,one of them like a princess. Princess:How dare you insult me in my kingdom,peasant?What do you want?You will not get away,the whole Europe will after you if you do something to me? Wunna:wow.Im scared my love.ah ah.hehe.I laugh.Initially I just want to ride a carriage but your bodyguards are so rude.so things get ugly.So if you dont want to get raped or killed,lead me to your palace now.I will take one of the horses now. Princess:Ok,lets see if you still dare arrogant in front of my father royal knights and mages.Set off. Wunna:oppos,Im scared.Unfortunately for you,nothing in this world harm me.Whatever,go quickly and serve me a cup of wine.I miss the cigrattes. The maids quickly serve him a wine bottle.Wunna quickly drink the wine and feel relax by rising Knight's armored horse.The group move into the palace.
Shameless 5 stars for this Novel yea yea i know this one is odd but don't tell me the concept isn't awesome add this to your library and i swear i wont disappoint you. ;b
In Earth,southeast asia,Burma republic nation,at May Town,normal guy working as a monk for 8 days with a boring life died at night during sleep,painless death.His soul is collected be a only remaining Goddess of moon. MC:where am I? He is currently at a room with ancient decoration. Goddess:hello,Wunna,Im a sole Goddess of All Universe. Wunna:Oh,You are a Goddes?So where are the other Gods?Why am I here? Goddess:You are dead during sleep and I called you because Im a lonely God and bore to dead and I called you because I want you accesend into Godhood.I need a partner or husband for coming eternity.But I cannt make you a God now,I dont have enough power for that.You have to achieve in mortal world,so I will send you to parallel Earth with some Immortal gifts.About other Gods,millions years ago,A war break out and all the gods including Olympians,Asgards and Jade palace died due to supreme destruction wepon and I was lucky due to visiting at mortal realms.So Im the lonly one now.I choose you to be my Husband because you never **** a virgin and only prostitutes and whores.So I pity you and you have good deeds by not committing any crimes.Then Im a Virgin Goddes,I will await you until you become a god.Satisfied now,future hubby? Wunna:wow,thats awesome.Ok,I will become a god,so send me into low realm. Goddess:I can give you ,immortality, not a weapon or thing in that world can bleed you,you will be forever young and Strength of a hundred men,speed of the fallen star,can teleport within a thousand miles and character creation.But you have to become a god before that world aged and destroyed by comprehending laws and emotions,you can do whatever you want in that world.Enjoy the funs,dont forget that Im waiting yiu,love.Now create your body. Wunna:thanks you,honey.I need six ** ab,6 ft 2in tall,white skin,face of Damon of Devil may cry game. Goddess:Granted,I will send you into that world, have funs.bye. Wunna:hahha,thanks sweethear In a forest, suddenly a space rip appear and a man was walking off.He is tall and white skin ,muscular slim body and black short hairs and blue eyes.He is wearing a V shaped neck black T-shirt ,Long cotton black coat,black fit pant,military boots,A sword looks like one in Lord of the rings movie which is mc king's sword.Sword is silver colour similar cross-guard. Wunna:Wow,here Iam with awesome physiqe and powers.hahahha.I need to know where am I and where is nearest town.I will teleport into next 500 miles to the west. Suddenly,3D door appear near a city,a man walk off.Ohh,I see a city now,I will explore and get intel and time to have funs. 4 horse pulling carriage was moving in a road lead to the Paris, and 20 knights are escorting it.In the carriage,a princess was sitting with 2maids. Elena,maid:Princess-sama,we are arriving soon.The king will be very happy to see you.You are the only daughter. Princess Catherine:I really miss my parents. Suddenly the carriage stop,a knight is knotting in the window. Knight:your highness,a man is stopping our carriage looks like a bandid with weired clothes.Should we kill or catch him? Princess:just catch him that stupid peasant.Dont bother with small matter. Knight cap:hey peasant, move away or die. Wunna:I just want to talk and you want me die,you mere mortal,kneel or disperse. kmight cap:just beat him to dead my guys. 2knights with shining silver armor came forward and they punch at him and their hands cracked . 2 knights screamed. Wunna came forward and beat the whole 20 knights like bullying.Wunna came to the carriage and open the door.He see 3 beauties,one of them like a princess. Princess:How dare you insult me in my kingdom,peasant?What do you want?You will not get away,the whole Europe will after you if you do something to me? Wunna:wow.Im scared my love.ah ah.hehe.I laugh.Initially I just want to ride a carriage but your bodyguards are so rude.so things get ugly.So if you dont want to get raped or killed,lead me to your palace now.I will take one of the horses now. Princess:Ok,lets see if you still dare arrogant in front of my father royal knights and mages.Set off. Wunna:oppos,Im scared.Unfortunately for you,nothing in this world harm me.Whatever,go quickly and serve me a cup of wine.I miss the cigrattes. The maids quickly serve him a wine bottle.Wunna quickly drink the wine and feel relax by rising Knight's armored horse.The group move into the palace.
Shameless 5 stars for this Novel yea yea i know this one is odd but don't tell me the concept isn't awesome add this to your library and i swear i wont disappoint you. ;b
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