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Hollow1997

This was the best DD fanfiction I’ve ever read and it’s a shame that it was dropped. I hope that one day maybe the author will continue it.

1yr
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dragon_rune

Excellent.... Marvelous...... I literally have no words.... My friend only regret was many characters r not in the original series that's it

1yr
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Danillo_Baldo

Muito bom uma pena que foi abandonado, a melhor fanfic de dd que li, uma das únicas que eu realmente gostei de ler, porque já li algumas que eram realmente ruins apenas para passar o tempo.

1yr
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jnnaoiffos

Uma mesclagem simplista que adorna clichês á vontade. Não apetece nenhum pouco o leitor. Um desenvolvimento base, sem nada de empolgante ou novo. Desastroso e decepcionante.

2yr
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DICKY_MAULANA

This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation

2yr
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kiritonaruto

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2yr
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Zaiko
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Perfeito..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Hikibi

one of the best fanfic I have ever read, shame It was dropped ..................................................................................................................

3yr
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Namer0ff

The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3yr
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Hikibi

just perfect, it's a shame that It was dropped though. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
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yahska

The story started out good but quickly got boring. It feels like I am reading another generic cultivation novel.+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-

3yr
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Hikibi

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4yr
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JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY

I really love this story 1000000/10, it's one of the best Douluo Dalu fanfics I've ever read, but author... You liar!!! What about the "De infinitely wouldn't drop it"... Now, I am left with just my imagination to know what will happen... Not even a summary, you monster!!!

4yr
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Aoalbjorn

Who is the MC ? MC is weaker than the Original novel MC. At least fucking make him a bit stronger than the Originial MC Tang wulin. I can't believe that this **** has so many chapters

4yr
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PhantomLord2

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Sketchy9

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5yr
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Godless_lifeless

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5yr
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Scait
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The best fanfic ever........ ...... .. ........... ................................,.......... Knbuugvugcibjbbjokmpom0on8jcygxfcuyjbnlnkbjv

5yr
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VuckLWolf

So I want to say that this is my first review and that this fanfic is amazing best DD with no contenders. Author knows how system works and background informations is spot on. What I didnt like is that there is no butterfly effect everything is same as original like every event is almost the same as original (i have bingie read to chapter 150). Thats the reason I stopped reading this. Giving it 5 stars because its head and shoulders above rest of DD fanfiction.

5yr
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MichaelLouisXXI

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ADS
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The rating is not fake its hidden gem Very amazing story, i like how the author build the mc personality and how he limited the power so mc not become boring. Everything can change in the story with reader dont think where it will go. I hope author continue this story again

5yr
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Hollow1997

This was the best DD fanfiction I’ve ever read and it’s a shame that it was dropped. I hope that one day maybe the author will continue it.

1yr
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dragon_rune

Excellent.... Marvelous...... I literally have no words.... My friend only regret was many characters r not in the original series that's it

1yr
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Danillo_Baldo

Muito bom uma pena que foi abandonado, a melhor fanfic de dd que li, uma das únicas que eu realmente gostei de ler, porque já li algumas que eram realmente ruins apenas para passar o tempo.

1yr
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jnnaoiffos

Uma mesclagem simplista que adorna clichês á vontade. Não apetece nenhum pouco o leitor. Um desenvolvimento base, sem nada de empolgante ou novo. Desastroso e decepcionante.

2yr
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DICKY_MAULANA

This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation

2yr
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kiritonaruto

why drop it it's such a great story please continue 🙏 😢 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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2yr
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Zaiko
LV 4 Badge

Perfeito..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
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Hikibi

one of the best fanfic I have ever read, shame It was dropped ..................................................................................................................

3yr
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Namer0ff

The best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3yr
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Hikibi

just perfect, it's a shame that It was dropped though. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
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yahska

The story started out good but quickly got boring. It feels like I am reading another generic cultivation novel.+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-+×÷-

3yr
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Hikibi

perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect perfect

4yr
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JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY

I really love this story 1000000/10, it's one of the best Douluo Dalu fanfics I've ever read, but author... You liar!!! What about the "De infinitely wouldn't drop it"... Now, I am left with just my imagination to know what will happen... Not even a summary, you monster!!!

4yr
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Aoalbjorn

Who is the MC ? MC is weaker than the Original novel MC. At least fucking make him a bit stronger than the Originial MC Tang wulin. I can't believe that this **** has so many chapters

4yr
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PhantomLord2

Best fanfic of soul land i have ever read it was fun reading this 🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Sketchy9

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

5yr
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Godless_lifeless

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5yr
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Scait
LV 4 Badge

The best fanfic ever........ ...... .. ........... ................................,.......... Knbuugvugcibjbbjokmpom0on8jcygxfcuyjbnlnkbjv

5yr
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VuckLWolf

So I want to say that this is my first review and that this fanfic is amazing best DD with no contenders. Author knows how system works and background informations is spot on. What I didnt like is that there is no butterfly effect everything is same as original like every event is almost the same as original (i have bingie read to chapter 150). Thats the reason I stopped reading this. Giving it 5 stars because its head and shoulders above rest of DD fanfiction.

5yr
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MichaelLouisXXI

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ADS
LV 6 Badge

The rating is not fake its hidden gem Very amazing story, i like how the author build the mc personality and how he limited the power so mc not become boring. Everything can change in the story with reader dont think where it will go. I hope author continue this story again

5yr
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