Odd One Out

LV 5

DarkSideOfTheSpoon

Alrighty tighty. It's been a while since I liked a small novel this much. This is the most intensive I can be. Writing quality: I see no flagrant spelling/grammar errors which means this has been through scrutiny and edited sufficiently. The bar is pretty low on this platform but you decided to backflip over it instead of just hop. Stability: No way to tell the release date so no way to know for now.. The only complaint is that so far there's too few chapters. Development: While there's not much going on so far, but you can tell that an arc is certainly present immediately. This shows a sense of showsmanship that's not present in the much longer stories. It just feels tactilely appealing. Character Development: This is good. The characters have character. Good. World background: Just the smallest bit an info dump. Not in a negative way either. It's easy to digest. Compact. You know what's going on. Overview: Tasty. No real issues, its got a compelling plot and theme. The delusions of the main character. The system being a player in almost all potential acts. This is a story that I want told. Take my power stones and continue this story (I don't have any left today...). Some notes: Cover art is iffy (probably should change it once the novel blows up.) Good story!

LV 1

Garvita_Kushwaha

Amazing!!!!! The mc has flaws, that's really unique in a good way. Anyways, I would recommend you to read this one. It's greatttt!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 1

mskim133

This book is a gem! like I'm reading a real novel! no offense tho to webnovel. The Mc not having a system in a world of system is a definite hook, I can't wait to see what'll happen in later chaps. Please update more?

LV 5

A_Passerby

Honestly surprised how this story drew me in. Rather than the cliche "crippled/hates/etc MC gets a supersystem" with massive infodump trying desperately to sell the world to the reader you get a sobering glimpse into the life of one of the few people born unable to have a "System" bind itself to them. The ominous back current of the world is slowly revealed as you progress and you are given just the right amount of information needed for a story like this, without relying on a lot of webnovel cliches or riding the coattails of other WNs concepts but with their twist. I really feel that the only thing holding this back from being in the double digits is simply the author lack of time to write, and hope that he does well in his schooling and will continue posting chapters when he's done. Other than that I would suggest fleshing the synopsis out as right now it does not properly express the tone and depth of the story.

LV 1

Meg_Goodhope

I love that the main character doesn't have to be perfect but he has flaws This is not a cliché, I haven't read anything like this' this is a real original. This book shows that there are people in this world who feel very odd and need help knowing they have a place in this world

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LV 1

Roonman

I think that this is a really good novel, i only read a few chapters but everytume i read one it made me want to read the next and the one after it. The world building and character devlopment are great so far. I think you sometimes use words that are unnecessarily advanced, it makes the text feel unnatural. And ofc stability of updates but authors have their own lives to tend, so good luck managing time going further!

LV 2

Saviour_Ibok_4011

Such an amazing story telling. I love the story and plot. The characters need a little more work though and probably an insight into how another character sees this world so we can have variety. Keep up the good work.

LV 11

_Rain

Honestly I felt so pissed.... at the orphanage people. Gosh! How could they blame him just because he was sleeping? So frustrating. I felt so frustrated for the MC 😭 And that just means that this novel is AMAZING! The writing is very clear and precise giving you a clear image in your head.I hope Doll can come out stronger and beat everyone up lol. Good work, Author!

LV 6

WidestGrin

Don look here. This is absolutely not the author's five-star review. Really. Really. Believe me. The name and profile pic displayed is fake.