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author please continue writing!!!!! I was just having fun reading it and amused by it but then it was left incomplete. WHY!?!??!!??!??!!!............... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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why, I really want to read it .why did you stopped updating 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I read this before and also one the books I first read on Webnovel. It got me hooked up to the story like, I can't stop thinking who should I really ship with her... Overall, I love everything about it!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Can't wait for more chapters. I literally need more of it!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
I loved the book, but why is it not being updated? Keep up the good work. I also love your other book, reincarnated as a fox with system. I would be very happy if you updated again.
After reading the sypnosis, I really wanna read this book but it hasn't been updated for so many months. So, I need to know if it will be drop as I don't wanna start reading sth tat has no ending. Author, could u kindly please leave a msg whether this will continue or not?
I really like this novel so please don't drop it author sama even though you strop righting it for 7 whole months![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Overall this book in my opinion has a lot of potential however for me it is spoilt by the fact that the main protagonist seems to be too airheaded and somehow never thinks about what consequences her actions or decisions might have if she does them.Also, there is the fact that everything just happens with not much description along with the fact that she can suddenly break through multiple cultivation layers in just a moment.But what really annoys me is the moment where she is complaining about having to fight people for the body tempering pill that she thinks she got through hard work by getting first place in the trial when in reality she just kinda cheated to get it by going through a secret tunnel.
I'm just in the first chapter, the synopsis is good very attracting that's why i decided to add it to my library to read, however, normally when i'm busy and don't have enough time to read with my eyes, i normally listen to novels instead, anyway it doesn't make any difference whether i read it or listen to it, but the most annoying thing is that!!! "WHAT THE HECK IS THE AUTHOR'S PROBLEM PUTTING A LOT OF THOSE F*****G DASHES LIKE FOR ALMOST EVERY EXPLANATION OF THE POWER TIER'S!!! IT'S SO ANNOYING TO LISTEN TO!!! AND I'M JUST IN CHAPTER ONE!!! I DON'T NORMALLY COMMENT BUT IT'S TRULY ANNOYING!!! 😡😡😡
this is so good. why are original novels so slow to update T^T.... not blaming anyone tho. i know how hard people have to think to create a good story so i'm just lamenting the fact that original stories sometimes are slow to update.....i don't know what i'm getting at here. i'll just place 5 stars all cuz im sad
This is a good story with overall but there are some issues with the translation. The translator might want to run the story through a text to speech engine. This will allow you to hear where the errors are more easily to be able to correct them.
I really wish that there would be a more steady update rate at least about 3 to 4 chapters a week so that the continuity of reading the story remains and it also prevents readers from losing interest due to too much time difference between updates. Also this is my present review after reading all chapters I'll change it once the story progresses.For the female lead I feel I have a love hate feeling about her. I'm only reading this sue to the plot and background which is pretty good.
The story is getting better and better. The story line is getting better and better. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters are interesting and fun.
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en serio adoro esta historia, aunque me molesta el no saber quien sera el ml, (soy del equipo ruyi :) ) ademas de que encuentro muy linda a mc, encuentre muy divertido cuando interactuo con la fl original del libro, aunque al final termino golpeandola incluyendo a todos los demas, a expección de ruyi.
❤️💗💕❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️
I really like the story and I am intrigued by the various changes that the world undergoes due to the intervention of mc and ruyi, which makes me record how the story will be from now on.
So far, the story is going very well, although honestly it bothers me a little to not know who to support as ML, although the past between me and his teacher intrigues me.
Continue writing . it's a very exciting novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩☺️☺️☺️😘😘😘😘😘😘😄😄😄😄😄😄😻😻😻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🧡💛💚💙💙💜🖤💗💗💗💗💗💗
It's amazing! I love how strong headed min is, the book is so funny and heart warming at the same time, it was so good I came from wattpad all the way here lol, keep it up ✨
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Well, the grammars were good the character OMG and the story was also super good in short i love it😁😊 I hope i have lot of SS deeeeeyymmmmm
It would be great if I can adventure like her😍😍but still not losing anything went I can just start my journey like her only with just read this novel.All her experience,happiness and romance can be feeling this novel,so join me read this you won’t regret it
Ok. I haven't read the book yet. But just the title got me excited. I have a soft spot for novel. I soon I saw I knew its gonna be a good one
Hai! Your work is really great! Keep up with the good job author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be really kind of u if u can check it out and leave some reviews and stars in there, I would really appreciate it 😊😊 My story is : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
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author pls update more, I love your writing and story development. And pls don't dropped the "reincarnated as a fox with a system" one of my favorite novel pls continue updating.
author please continue writing!!!!! I was just having fun reading it and amused by it but then it was left incomplete. WHY!?!??!!??!??!!!............... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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why, I really want to read it .why did you stopped updating 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I read this before and also one the books I first read on Webnovel. It got me hooked up to the story like, I can't stop thinking who should I really ship with her... Overall, I love everything about it!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Can't wait for more chapters. I literally need more of it!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
I loved the book, but why is it not being updated? Keep up the good work. I also love your other book, reincarnated as a fox with system. I would be very happy if you updated again.
After reading the sypnosis, I really wanna read this book but it hasn't been updated for so many months. So, I need to know if it will be drop as I don't wanna start reading sth tat has no ending. Author, could u kindly please leave a msg whether this will continue or not?
I really like this novel so please don't drop it author sama even though you strop righting it for 7 whole months![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Overall this book in my opinion has a lot of potential however for me it is spoilt by the fact that the main protagonist seems to be too airheaded and somehow never thinks about what consequences her actions or decisions might have if she does them.Also, there is the fact that everything just happens with not much description along with the fact that she can suddenly break through multiple cultivation layers in just a moment.But what really annoys me is the moment where she is complaining about having to fight people for the body tempering pill that she thinks she got through hard work by getting first place in the trial when in reality she just kinda cheated to get it by going through a secret tunnel.
I'm just in the first chapter, the synopsis is good very attracting that's why i decided to add it to my library to read, however, normally when i'm busy and don't have enough time to read with my eyes, i normally listen to novels instead, anyway it doesn't make any difference whether i read it or listen to it, but the most annoying thing is that!!! "WHAT THE HECK IS THE AUTHOR'S PROBLEM PUTTING A LOT OF THOSE F*****G DASHES LIKE FOR ALMOST EVERY EXPLANATION OF THE POWER TIER'S!!! IT'S SO ANNOYING TO LISTEN TO!!! AND I'M JUST IN CHAPTER ONE!!! I DON'T NORMALLY COMMENT BUT IT'S TRULY ANNOYING!!! 😡😡😡
this is so good. why are original novels so slow to update T^T.... not blaming anyone tho. i know how hard people have to think to create a good story so i'm just lamenting the fact that original stories sometimes are slow to update.....i don't know what i'm getting at here. i'll just place 5 stars all cuz im sad
This is a good story with overall but there are some issues with the translation. The translator might want to run the story through a text to speech engine. This will allow you to hear where the errors are more easily to be able to correct them.
I really wish that there would be a more steady update rate at least about 3 to 4 chapters a week so that the continuity of reading the story remains and it also prevents readers from losing interest due to too much time difference between updates. Also this is my present review after reading all chapters I'll change it once the story progresses.For the female lead I feel I have a love hate feeling about her. I'm only reading this sue to the plot and background which is pretty good.
The story is getting better and better. The story line is getting better and better. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters are interesting and fun.
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en serio adoro esta historia, aunque me molesta el no saber quien sera el ml, (soy del equipo ruyi :) ) ademas de que encuentro muy linda a mc, encuentre muy divertido cuando interactuo con la fl original del libro, aunque al final termino golpeandola incluyendo a todos los demas, a expección de ruyi.
❤️💗💕❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️❤️💗💕💕💓❤️💗💕💓💞♥️❣️
I really like the story and I am intrigued by the various changes that the world undergoes due to the intervention of mc and ruyi, which makes me record how the story will be from now on.
So far, the story is going very well, although honestly it bothers me a little to not know who to support as ML, although the past between me and his teacher intrigues me.
Continue writing . it's a very exciting novel 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩☺️☺️☺️😘😘😘😘😘😘😄😄😄😄😄😄😻😻😻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🧡💛💚💙💙💜🖤💗💗💗💗💗💗
It's amazing! I love how strong headed min is, the book is so funny and heart warming at the same time, it was so good I came from wattpad all the way here lol, keep it up ✨
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Well, the grammars were good the character OMG and the story was also super good in short i love it😁😊 I hope i have lot of SS deeeeeyymmmmm
It would be great if I can adventure like her😍😍but still not losing anything went I can just start my journey like her only with just read this novel.All her experience,happiness and romance can be feeling this novel,so join me read this you won’t regret it
Ok. I haven't read the book yet. But just the title got me excited. I have a soft spot for novel. I soon I saw I knew its gonna be a good one
Hai! Your work is really great! Keep up with the good job author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be really kind of u if u can check it out and leave some reviews and stars in there, I would really appreciate it 😊😊 My story is : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
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author pls update more, I love your writing and story development. And pls don't dropped the "reincarnated as a fox with a system" one of my favorite novel pls continue updating.