My Hair Length Determines My Super Saiyan Power!

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Dtroid

Interesting idea.. And its been around for a while but nobody got too explore too much with it.. You can probably show this in Future Trunks timeline. It will be a great story that way and probably be easy to make a crossover with Kalan if you ever feel like it.

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Bakar

Great Toga nice to see another one of your work and like the other one this one seem amazing too keep it up and Thanks😍 Fgugugguhtriosyostisitt8sri

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swordzero

Stupid author gave mc op ability but mc can't even use it a fight properly. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Ashwatthama

Good story buddy just don't drop And don't make if someone cut his hair he will lose power Continue If you don't wanna continue then please release more chapters on your other one man 1 chapter per day at least man give us 2 ch. No Pls man try and share your patron account that way you will feel more motivated if people help on some way Even if they will be less but still 1+1+1+1+1+1+,,,......... So just release more buddy not much Just 2 ch per day And 3 on some special occasion maybe Sunday or whenever you love to ? Just come back pls old Toga

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Depresso_

And again author fucked up one of the bad-ass Saiyans. As the authors say's "He guessed that Raditz was just going to beat up Goku and Gohan and forcefully abduct them after killing all of Earth's population", but no he made another cool Saiyan into some kind of puss*.. What the hell is wrong with everyone, they always change Dbz cool-blooded Saiyans into kind-hearted and weak pussi*s. Why can't somebody just write good fanfic according to this fan based manga " Evil Goku. The End of Mankind. " ? It would at least be cool, with awesome Mc not some kind of kind puss*

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jesusguero25

I like it so far. You should also read the authors other novel. Its really good and i hope this novel turns to be as good....................................

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L1_a

Even though it’s not accurate to the source still a fan fic is meant to take a story and **** up the whole rules/laws of the story Webnovel **** You with this 140 characters ****, if I was a saiyan I could transform unot a daiyan from the rage this 140 character limit brings to me.

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Kurosis

so far so good you sir have a gift i believe u can balance both of your dragon ball stories. was wondering about your release schedule since it has been 3 days since you released a chapter (currently on chapter3). ** love the different perspective since we never truly understood Raditz. may i recommend you reading this fanfic describes a lot about Saiyans(including gokus family) and a decent amount on Raditz himself https://***.fanfiction.net/s/12440505/1/A-Saiyan-s-Family gave some stones so you better not drop this ;D 4.6 score since it is still early

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RandomLurkingGuy

Can't believe these words are about to come out of my mouth (hands) but Rapunzel would be nerf worthy in this. 140~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~kun

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ManGanu

nice story keep up bcbxsbcjbxjcbxjcjxckzxhkcjhxcjxkjhcxkchcxkjhckjxhcjkxhjchxjhcxjhcjhxgchjhxkchjxhcjxhcjhxjhckjxhckjxhckjhxkjchkjhckjshksjhckjshckjhskjchkjshckjshckjshkjchskjhckjshkjchskjhckjhskjchkjsjhcjkhskjchkschk

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Ashborn2271

My question to is what’s up with Raditz and his Super Saiyan in your latest episodes got his ass kicked by gohan and goku Super Saiyan what I don’t understand his Super Saiyan can only last 2 minutes why is that exactly and does it give a bigger boost then a regular Super Saiyan because if it does how can he be defeated even with both goku and gohan as his base power is clearly higher then theirs and of Super Saiyan is a unique one then shouldn’t he be able to defeat them easily. Please clarify this. Thank for the chapter, though it seems it to easy for Raditz and co, do make it a bit easier plus there should be a limitation on Senzu beans.

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Leun

Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!! Good novel but...... release.... chapt realease Need rrelease!!!

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wisdomseeker

Five Stars! oh god Toga You're so good.. i hope i have bit a your talent... sigh .. ... .... ...... ....... ........ ......... .......... Thanks 😁

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Imabethatguy12345

I thought you died, and yet you come back bringing awesome good quality chapters? This was a miracle, grisly, and it gives me hope of other fanfics out there that are long since dead. A bleached multverse, and a knights will I'm looking at you.

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DragonReaver

Giving 5 stars so you don't drop it like your other Dragon ball Novel TOGA. Toga over here actually listening to the people trying to create their perfect story and not his own. I don't know why you dropped the other one because you were getting critics in the comments, you could easily tell people liked ya with all the freaking power stones you were getting but oh well.

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_James_Jones_

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_James_Jones_

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Leun

All five stars!!! So please... realease something.... 😭😭😭 All five stars!!! So please... realease something.... 😭😭😭 All five stars!!! So please... realease something.... 😭😭😭 All five stars!!! So please... realease something.... 😭😭😭 All five stars!!! So please... realease something.... 😭😭😭

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NeoBee

It's good!!!! just wanna say that . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . F*ck you 140!!!