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Novel has been dropped so I can focus on my main work: "Legend of the Gunslinger Mage."
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12013761505760005/
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Owen Bytheway was an artist. He had been dating this girl, Chloe, for more than three years. Although she had very odd quirks and he noticed it, they are very happy together.
Eventually, she invited him to her house, a gigantic mansion in the countryside, to meet her family. After a sumptuous feast, they sat down for dessert.
It was then that her father, Mr. Drake, asked him.
"So... Owen, you know Chloe is a vampire, right?"
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Release schedule: Monday, Wednesday, Friday at 1:05 AM (GMT + 8)
Genres: Comedy, Romance, Male Lead, Slice of Life, Magical Realism, Realistic Fiction, Action
This novel was written in response to the Writing Prompt Contest #18: Vampire Romance.
Mildly NSFW, but nothing extreme.
(Temporary) cover by Neimy Kanani
Hope you guys enjoy it! Please leave a comment and vote if you do!
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Novel has been dropped so I can focus on Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12013761505760005/
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This is a promising novel. It has a lot of breathing room, and needs to grow a little in terms of bringing out the emotional parts of the story, but the idea is sound, and the writing doesn't really feel rough. Few grammar mistakes, and I can see the comedy. If you want a light read, this is a good top ten pick, everyone. Give it a try!
I really love this story so far but I need more updates on this book soon! I love how she’s a vampire and she’s allergic to blood and he already know she’s a vampire and she’s just got a look on her face like, “ what?!?!”
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It is a good book.. Giving readers something fresh to look for and that is amazing. I really appreciate the writer and I'm going to be so addicted
Despite myself I'm enjoying this. Perhaps because of snarky mc. Reminds me of Hotel Transylvania and that vampire documentary. Patriarch Petyr? Lol Hope there won't bee too much sappy romance and decent comedy in future haps.
Story Premise (5 out of 5): - A vampire romance story but with a nice twist. I like that. Writing Quality (5 out of 5): - Good array of vocabulary and smooth grammar in each chapters. A first-person POV which has not been done in a long while, specially in this website. Easy to read and the flow of it is good. Story Development (5 out of 5): - What can I say? I like it! The initial chapters already set a temporary goal, which is nice. The pacing is great. Good flow of the story. Character Design (4 out of 5): - I'm a little critical on this one. I only know how Chloe looks like, but Owen needs more description. And also Chloe's siblings. The dialogues are great! Rare to see that these days. Each characters have distinct personalities that make each one identifiable. World (4 out of 5): - It's modern day( I guess?). I know where the characters are and what they're doing, so that's good. I just hope that I know where they are in real life if it's set in real time. And one last thing. This story piqued my interest, and it''s mainly due to the chemistry between Chloe and Owen. Good stuff. I'll be sure to read this as I have it in my library now.
Cute story. The back story maybe could have been done in a Prologue. I didn't care for those chapters as much. I liked the actual story more. Are vampires known in the world and accepted? He seemed to take her being a vampire with a pretty chill attitude. The dialogue is pretty natural and I enjoyed how light it was. It is a good feel good kind of story. Only some minor errors, but nothing that really is offensive. We are all human, so no biggie. Good job. I wish there was a bit more description of the setting. You did a good job in the beginning of chapter 1, but nothing much since then. Good job
Tiết lộ SpoilerÂm lượng 1
- 1 A familiar problem 6 years ago
- 2 How we first met 6 years ago
- 3 Preparation begins! 6 years ago
- 4 Hello again 6 years ago
- 5 Blood Offering 6 years ago
- 6 Double standard 6 years ago
- 7 Bad news (not a chapter) 6 years ago
- 8 The American Vampire Society 6 years ago
- 9 Old feud (part 1) 6 years ago
- 10 Old Feud (part 2) 6 years ago
- 11 The stake 6 years ago
- 12 What could go wrong? 6 years ago
- 13 Hiatus announcement 6 years ago
Hello, this is the author. I hope you enjoy this romantic comedy novel. Have a nice day and good luck in your (love) life! -----------------------------