Cataclysm System (Completed)

LV 4

Nefarious31

Shameless review to get the ball rolling. Just give it a try. You'll enjoy it! The fights are very gory though, so just beware if you don't like those kinds of things.

LV 14

DawnSky

A potentially good story ruined by one of the worst MCs I have ever had the displeasure of reading about. The MC is a pathetic, cowardly, weak beta soyboy ***** and remains so throughout every chapter. Each chapter is literally a case of him being walked all over, beaten up and slapped around etc. Any power or skills the MC gets? Other randoms in the story already have. Every random stranger the MC meets? All stronger then him as they walk all over him while he cowers. He doesn't do anything for himself or on his own he always goes crawling back to those walking all over him for more. Asides from that, little worldbuilding doesn't help the story. Comparatively speaking, a higher level of grammar then most of the **** written here.

LV 6

ThrustThunder

"Not a single thing had changed… This meant that the only way to increase his stats was then via circulation." Gotta say this: "F*ck You, Mr. Author" If you wanted to write a Wuxia novel you should have just written a Wuxia novel. To take a perfectly good LitRPG story and strip it of it's lootables, it's skill advancements, it's class system, it's stat dependencies and now to make it so even killing enemies serves no more purpose... What's the point anymore? I don't care about these random people, because you've already introduced dozens of "Allies" to us that we'll never see again so there's no point even learning these one's names. I don't care about the Intergalactic struggles going on behind the scenes because I have no idea how any of it works, they've only been mentioned a grand total of 5 times throughout the 95 chapters and it was vague at best. You've failed to make me care about Stanis as a Person, a Character or as the Protagonist because he started out weak and annoying and now he's just angry and annoying. He's become just another Generic Reactive MC now that all personal control has been taken away now that he's been captured by the Aliens and forced to do these pointless trials. And even before this he was just a spastic meathead running from one fight to the next, relying on Plot Armor to save him from his enemies (And friends) killing him every time he decides to take a nap in the middle of a battlefield. Most of all I no longer am able to care about the rambling, disjointed, sleep-induced-teleportation mess you call your overall narrative because of all these factors and more, due to how obvious it is that you had no ideas how the plot was going to go more then half a chapter ahead as you were writing it. I applaud your ability to keep putting out chapter after chapter of a Novel you no longer had any interest in writing with such a high quality of coherence and editing, but beyond that I'm impressed that you had so much to say with your words and so little care about how they flowed together as a whole.

LV 4

Maurz

This has probably the worst mc in any novel i've ever read. He's seriously borderline retarded. The only thing I've enjoyed about the book is the concept behind it, but it's just so bad

LV 5

krylol

Shitty novel don't waste your time. A retarded protagonist without a brain and a crybaby you should expend your time in better things that this piece of ****.

LV 10

dy2746

Warning: If you dislike mentally weak MC who loses consciousness every few chapters, not to bright and not in a comedic way and always dazes off only to have the charters next to him shake him out of it every other chapter then skip this. If none of the above bothers you then this is a solid story and you just might enjoy it.

LV 11

kaushee

The storyline is not bad. The main character is so ***** and always falls into traps and backstabbings. This is truly a **** up story. Feels so disappointed about humans. This might be over the top but there's some truth about human nature. People doesn't like to see others doing good or living a better life than themselves. Some people might find this claim rubbish. But tap into your innerself and see how you truly feels and how other feels about you. People take reasons as country, origin, religion, believes. But everyone forget end of the day we all are human. Human nature is to find a purpose, so they make reason to go on living without thinking the harm they do overall. Im not a saint I'm the same.(This is my excuse to feeling like that) hahaha ☻☻☻ Feels so disappointed about humans.

LV 6

Beefnator

:::::::::::::::::::::::::: Like it so far ! :::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: This Story need more ** ! :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

LV 10

Lightning_god

The best type of this kind of genre. I've read around and I thought I would really enjoy this genre. Better than world of demons and gods. Nice level of gore and not too much focusing on *** unlike other similar novels

LV 12

Silent_C1own

For some reason I thought this was a novel abt a system that helps someone destroy the world... Welp I’ll just read this now Shudjwbdiebdgwjdhhedibrejxnethisisfor140charactersdhrhduwgduebdhehfhdjsjdhshdhh

LV 5

CsK

You might want to check royalroad for more reviews. It’s a pretty good novel (although the author is pretty shameless...). Similar elements to Master Hunter K and other survival novels.

LV 6

Armand_Targaryen

thx for the chapters :D __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 3

Lustful_Death

I remember reading this book a few years ago when I was just getting into novels of this genre, I read through the entire book in one sitting. this book has had the ending that has left the deepest impression on me, the way the MC was used and killed off like a dog by his underlings just exceptional. I have read many books that eclipse this one in each aspect yet still none of them can beat the ending.This book is the reason why I don't care about so called bad endings. No matter how many books I read or how long of a time passes I will always remember this books title and it's legendary ending.

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LV 3

Rotten_Sarcophagus

bad, like I can't even describe how badly the story is written, the mc is utter trash and the author always forgets about his own mechanics. and many more

LV 15

Cody_Bowen

Not too bad, but can get sticky at points. I enjoyed it as a light read.