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Chris tried hacking his favorite game, but once he successfully hacked it, a frown appeared and then he passed out. When he came back to life, he realized he obtained a hacking system.
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Viết đánh giánot worth reading.. MC is so whiny and stupid this is a hack system why make life so difficult when you have this kind of system.. take note MC is the one who made the system so he should be in control of it.. so why does the system the one in control of what the MC wants? intelligence pill is so cheap so why does the MC not buy it to max out his intelligence? MC is obviously smart enough to make a hacking system so why does he still do stupid things?
Tiết lộ SpoilerHey guys, the author here. If people don't see the synopsis, the auxiliary chapter explaining things, here's the message. I got this idea from Hacking System. I'm mainly just going to take some aspects of what the other author is doing and implementing it in this one. However, the system is more like the IRAS and the system from Ultimate Scheming System fused together so I'm not going to make the MC so broken that he's able to destroy the entire universe with 1 hit in 3 chapters. The reason why I decided to write this. I'm sorry to be blunt, but the original story had terrible grammar that the author just would not fix so I decided to get this wonderful concept and write it into a novel with decent grammar. I'm not sure how the story will go starting from here though. This is more like a part time job while the other novel I'm writing (My Story in the Otherworld) is my main job. So if you enjoy this one go to my other novel and check it out! I spent a lot more effort on that one than this one. I'm not saying that I don't spend any effort on this novel, but just think of it as me shamelessly advertising my other not as popular novel that I really want others to read. Thx for reading
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Dont read it if u think the mc would be cool and op and the system would be a real hack and everything i hate it so much ...................... .
The overall premise of the story is interesting, but the delivery is horrible, the character itself is inconsistent and lacks any sort of development throughout the story, the system presents little consistency in it's methods and is a complete asshole without any reason. the character is presented as a normal kid that tried and failed many times at hacking and exploiting games in his life, and when he finally succeeds he somehow gets a system, but later he's gets involved with the FBI (again) because there was a crime he was coerced to help solve against a criminal organization that he was able to hack......WTF, where did this come from? how did it get to this point without any explanation? The MC's family treats him like slave for no reason other than he simply deserves it, needs to pay rent to live there, and there is no affection between MC and family members, but somehow he pays rent but is not able to go live somewhere else? The MC lacks any sort of real and racional human traits, his thought process and reasoning is non existent, he has no motivation besides being a tool for everyone around him to use and doesn't try to change his situation in any way besides letting someone use him for their benefit. I stopped reading at 25 or something chapters because the MC showed no real progress and the "hacking" of everything is some basic OP shop, he doesn't truly exploit his abilities and his environment with his new acquired powers, there is the beginnings of a "hidden" society of cultivators later but it seems irrelevant.
Tiết lộ SpoilerMan I like the idea I like you're way in writing the story but no one like Pathetic mc you can Macke him I low Kay but not a little ***** I'm gonna drop you're novel and thanks
1. Shitty family can be rather realistic. 2. I knew parents that want their trouble making kids, to pay rent or get out, while still in High School. 3. Siblings are arses. Many of them who do not get along, are known for being entitled and insulting everything about their elder/younger siblings. Expecting them to do their chores, homework and even do them favors despite how bad they treat them. 4. Complaining about cost is realistic, and if you take the "Become powerful and wealthy" automatically, then life would be utterly boring despite how much fruit it might bring being an unparalleled genius. =w=
Tiết lộ SpoilerGeneraly the story is quite fun but i have a question-Will he go to another world and if yes then what world DC,Marvel or anime world maybe light novel world?
Seems like you will work off the idea if you do please don’t do what the other author did and completely put the Hacking system into a useless position he changed the story massively and the hacking system pretty much isn’t even there anymore
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I read this awhile ago and forgot about it and just remembered it it took awhile to find it 5/5 will read again!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Tiết lộ SpoilerThe Mc is absolutely unbelievable stupid, With all the powers he is able to get, he is still pushed around by his family his so called friends and every body else. He is borderline Beta Mc, who only complains but is not able to make a hard cut. All in all it is a story where the Mc is an insecure whiner, who is not able to use his powers the right way.
I like The ark of the scooby doo, very original. It is a bit confusing the beginning of the story with all the old characters that do not make much sense now that they are being introduced
Tiết lộ Spoilersorry i pass i can't really read this as i don't licke and really just pass . i am not seaying this **** just lick that readit if you want ..CAUS I DON'T CARE .
Tác giả JeffreyDO
Just avoid. I came into this hoping for something good. Maybe an intelligient MC. Maybe someone who gets a break with a cool system. NOPE. Instead MC's ENTIRE FAMILY (including the MC) are GARBAGE. MC is a completel idiot. So dumb that when given the chance to make himself intelligient, to make himself an unparalleled genius. He complains about the cost (less than 1/4 of his total present funds). Then decides to not do it. Rinse repeat or being able to have unparalleled talent. Then introduce MC's family, A sister who insults everything about him while expecting him to do her homework. A Father who does the same. Then a mother who demands he pay rent (while still in High School), becuz MC supposedly got in trouble for hacking. Except everything in the hacking backstory points to MC not being a hacker, but being an idiot who failed at using suggested hacking methods. Like, How do you attempt your first hack on a game with your own gaming account!? Then. MC for the next several chapters just goes on to complain about the unfairness of life and the cost of things, when he can easily affor to make himself an unparalleled talent and genius. Yeah... Just avoid. MC is an idiot who seemingly always takes the lesser of two options.