(HIATUS) Danmachi: Road to Godhood

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Senseless_senior

Please write stable and don't drop it on the midway pleaseeeed! The problem within fan-fic sect is being damped and dropped on the midway. So don't drop it if you can because I like this anime and wants to read some fan fic.

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GodsTongue

Please dont.drop the novel. it really has a god potential (get the jokek lol) just by reading the first four chapters. (filling up words) 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖

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Jc0444884

O.K. I'm really stoked about the fact that this is a danmachi fic which is horribly under-represented in the fanfiction community, but I do have to say a few things about the actual quality. It's not too terribly written and the events are written in a way that is easy to follow. The MC is ok, but the system idea in the world of danmachi is kind of redundant. My biggest complaint with this story so far is the lack of a familia. A familia is a really easy way to introduce new characters and move the plot along but you completely opted out of it. Definitely makes me worry about the future of this story. That, however, isn't my biggest complaint with this story. HOW IS THE MC GOING TO GET BEST GIRL HESTIA IF HE ISN'T IN HER FAMILIA! I'm assuming this is going to be a harem story based on the harem number thing in the system. So if this is a harem it is, criminal! CRIMINAL I SAY! To not include Hestia. Make sure to introduce Hestia soon my good sir, or you will have a waifu war on your hands. That is all.

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Immortal_One

Thanks for reading! Comment if you have any questions! If you give me a review 3 stars or lower please tell me what I can do to improve for later chapters, thanks!

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PaleKing

Don't even read it. It's dropped and it only has like 5 chapters. It would have been a fun read for an OP MC but my expectations were too high.

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Straxy

NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! WHY IS IT HIATUS!?!?!?!?! NOOOO!!! NOOO!!! DANMACHI WOULD BE AWESOME!! Lol sorry for the rage.....................................................................................................................................................................

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Kosueki

I been waiting for a danmachi fan novel to come out.. Here it is.. Because I am tired of Naruto much.. Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3

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QinZeus

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Chanos

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LonelySummer

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EternalGrowth

I support you. I support you. Thanks for thr chapter and all your hardwork thank thanks and thanks. Thanks thanks thanks thanks. Thanks thanks

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pussyburster

i think it is a good start, i don't even need to say that has a great potential. It's a pity I can't give you power stones, because I already used them

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Wh0kn0ws

ONE FANFIC FOR DANMACHI HELL YESSSSS! I hope that you make it worth author... this novel have one of the best world plots that u can literaly do ANYTHING. I will be waiting for more.