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keep up the good work man! but a little improvement will do so that it will be more intriguing for the coming more chapter that all thanks!!!!!
Hello guys, for those who's doesn't know about this Fiction. I would express a little summary so that you can understand the story well. The MC is a 12 years old child having a Photographic Memory, but due to the restriction of his Soul part of his brain force to forget the things he sees with his Photographic Memory so that the body will not be a burden because of excess Soul Force. In the later Chapter, he encountered a system called YiYi, then unintentionally got a Universal Bead that made him travel through any kind of worlds! That's all if you're curious, read all of the Chapters so you can understand it much better.
keep up the good work man! but a little improvement will do so that it will be more intriguing for the coming more chapter that all thanks!!!!!
Hello guys, for those who's doesn't know about this Fiction. I would express a little summary so that you can understand the story well. The MC is a 12 years old child having a Photographic Memory, but due to the restriction of his Soul part of his brain force to forget the things he sees with his Photographic Memory so that the body will not be a burden because of excess Soul Force. In the later Chapter, he encountered a system called YiYi, then unintentionally got a Universal Bead that made him travel through any kind of worlds! That's all if you're curious, read all of the Chapters so you can understand it much better.