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For me the grammar is too horrible to be able to continue to read this nice story. I have reach chapter 28 and so far the style is too clumsy, present and past temps are mixed in every sentences, who speaks is not always clear... Sad, as the story and mechanics are nice. This story would be great with a mass reediting.
The book is really good but I don't understand if the author wants the book to be harem or not. then there's the case of Hayley and Spencer. To me Spencer was too harsh to Hayley, for a girl to even bring up being in a harem shows how much she loves you yet he still broke her heart
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hidden gem, 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🍾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🍾😍😍😍🍾🍾🍾🍾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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I like this story and the way the MC takes care of the people close to him. the idea of living in a new earth with powers is also very interesting. the mystery around the villain serves as a hook.
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It’s a very interesting premise and the system isn’t overpowered like most in other stories, but the grammar mistakes and sentence structures make it difficult to read.
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It is a great novel that uses a small but realistic event that could happen in real life. It expands and shows the limits and powers of them like solar powered ability.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
This is the kind of novel that you hooked by its characters and plot long-term, even after catching up on reading, I present some questions that have an answer later, I guess at least two complete stories more. I recommend it since it has a bit of everything, action, romance, comedy and above all a lot of randomness.
The story needs a harem tag. It starts out very good, but the non-sexual harem elements begin showing up pretty quickly. A large number of female characters gather around the MC. The only male secondary character begins showing more weaknesses, character flaws, reduced appearances, etc than the female ones. Then it just stops the pretenses at being a monogamous story.
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The story is quite interesting so far. Good job m8. 🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️
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Each chapter keeps getting better and better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to the next updatevd chapter...............................................
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I love the story, i like this book. Yeah. So.. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
Basically it is an apocalyptic setting novel with MC who gets an A.I. System. I did not come across something like it before, but I really do like this novel. The novel follows a somewhat slow but logical rhythm in events. The events and scenes are not pumped up with over the board action. But still they are enough to keep the reader wanting more. I'm still in chapter 36 but I believe there will be some romance and maybe a love ******** since the sparks are there between the MC and his ex-girlfriend and his next door girl whom he knew since childhood who had a crush on him.
Have been reading this since chapter 20 Just came out. Have been reading ever since loyaly with every update. Though the grammar might be a bit spotty at times, the great story that's being told more than makes up for that. If you want to read an exciting, original,, non cliché story, you need tot have this in your library. Keep it Up author!. Sorry for my English, not native.
This is one of the best I've seen so far . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ... Only reason I wrote this review is because the book was that good!!!!!
Here's a really good story with likeable and developped character, good romance not dragged out over 400 chapters, the writing isn't always top notch but it doesn't hinder the reading at all, if you can get over it it is a really good story wich deserves to be at least top 30 imo
Very enjoyable and great novel to spend time on. Sometimes development gets pretty slow or it may even feel boring, but trust me — you will not regret if you continue reading. Author has pretty neat ideas regarding abilities, system function and world building which feels quite refreshing. Many side characters are pretty good written, many times I felt conflicted about them. Protagonists development doesn't seem off either. I didn't notice any potholes or inconsistences during my read.
I'm an avid reader. Since pre-school I've been reading daily. Books, short stories, poems...and then I found fanfiction. I loved that I could find more stories with characters I already loved from their canon platform. There are days I find great story ideas, but the writers' skills and forethought were lacking. Thousands of dropped stories, thousands of abandoned ideas, thousands of just pure garbage from trolls or those just wanting to put an idea out there no matter how poor. When they improve it's a blessing, and a moment of quiet pride to see that growrg. But many don't, for various reasons. And then, once in awhile, you find a gem. Maybe it's just a glimmer, just a corner of a shine on a lump of coal. But after taking it, and carefully washing it, and polishing it, you realize you've found a truly beautiful and valuable thing. I've been here on Web novel for a few months now, and it's only now, with this fic, that I'm so immensely glad that I stayed and kept sifting through the coal of the many many stories on here. Yes, great ideas. Yes, wonderful storytelling. But they've just been failing to really keep me enthralled in the story. Because of translation issues, poor grammar, or just straight up using words incorrectly. It kinda takes you out of the story to even figure out what was just said. This fic may not be perfect, but it certainly has caused me to feel gratified that I stayed here, and excited to find more of such inspired writing. It's a great quality work that I'll happily keep following and eagerly look forward to everyday. And not to be morbid or depressing, but, in case we don't keep our health. Or life takes you away from writing. I just want you to understand and keep in mind. I'm grateful for your effort, and time, and diligence. Thank you for the story.
Couldn’t figure if the MC was a girl or guy. They are twins, which maKE reader first thought is that MC is a girl. But actually a boy. At chapter 1
Pretty interesting for an original story. If you like the system type it fits the bill. Also a plus is that none of the chapters are blocked and their is a lot to read.
I'm really enjoying this book. I love how the system doesn't just give him everything he actually has to work for it a little bit. The writing of the book has a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that really takes away from the story. So far the story is well thought out.
The wait is getting a little long but I will continue to support this book because it is very well written. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
For me the grammar is too horrible to be able to continue to read this nice story. I have reach chapter 28 and so far the style is too clumsy, present and past temps are mixed in every sentences, who speaks is not always clear... Sad, as the story and mechanics are nice. This story would be great with a mass reediting.
The book is really good but I don't understand if the author wants the book to be harem or not. then there's the case of Hayley and Spencer. To me Spencer was too harsh to Hayley, for a girl to even bring up being in a harem shows how much she loves you yet he still broke her heart
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hidden gem, 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🍾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🍾😍😍😍🍾🍾🍾🍾😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
A detailed world with powers that actually makes sense. Dhrh fhjf fnjf hfhr hrhr fjjfd hdhf hfhr jrh jfjf hfbf jrhr gjfj jffj jffj jffj jfjf fjjf jfjf
I like this story and the way the MC takes care of the people close to him. the idea of living in a new earth with powers is also very interesting. the mystery around the villain serves as a hook.
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It’s a very interesting premise and the system isn’t overpowered like most in other stories, but the grammar mistakes and sentence structures make it difficult to read.
Tiết lộ Spoiler It is a great novel that uses a small but realistic event that could happen in real life. It expands and shows the limits and powers of them like solar powered ability.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is the kind of novel that you hooked by its characters and plot long-term, even after catching up on reading, I present some questions that have an answer later, I guess at least two complete stories more. I recommend it since it has a bit of everything, action, romance, comedy and above all a lot of randomness.
The story needs a harem tag. It starts out very good, but the non-sexual harem elements begin showing up pretty quickly. A large number of female characters gather around the MC. The only male secondary character begins showing more weaknesses, character flaws, reduced appearances, etc than the female ones. Then it just stops the pretenses at being a monogamous story.
Good read. Slow update. Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates. Good read. Slow updates.
The story is quite interesting so far. Good job m8. 🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️🅱️
The story is nice and looking forward for more... More moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreMore moreore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
More chapters please............................................ More chapters please............................................ More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Each chapter keeps getting better and better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to the next updatevd chapter...............................................
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Basically it is an apocalyptic setting novel with MC who gets an A.I. System. I did not come across something like it before, but I really do like this novel. The novel follows a somewhat slow but logical rhythm in events. The events and scenes are not pumped up with over the board action. But still they are enough to keep the reader wanting more. I'm still in chapter 36 but I believe there will be some romance and maybe a love ******** since the sparks are there between the MC and his ex-girlfriend and his next door girl whom he knew since childhood who had a crush on him.
Have been reading this since chapter 20 Just came out. Have been reading ever since loyaly with every update. Though the grammar might be a bit spotty at times, the great story that's being told more than makes up for that. If you want to read an exciting, original,, non cliché story, you need tot have this in your library. Keep it Up author!. Sorry for my English, not native.
This is one of the best I've seen so far . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ... Only reason I wrote this review is because the book was that good!!!!!
Here's a really good story with likeable and developped character, good romance not dragged out over 400 chapters, the writing isn't always top notch but it doesn't hinder the reading at all, if you can get over it it is a really good story wich deserves to be at least top 30 imo
Very enjoyable and great novel to spend time on. Sometimes development gets pretty slow or it may even feel boring, but trust me — you will not regret if you continue reading. Author has pretty neat ideas regarding abilities, system function and world building which feels quite refreshing. Many side characters are pretty good written, many times I felt conflicted about them. Protagonists development doesn't seem off either. I didn't notice any potholes or inconsistences during my read.
I'm an avid reader. Since pre-school I've been reading daily. Books, short stories, poems...and then I found fanfiction. I loved that I could find more stories with characters I already loved from their canon platform. There are days I find great story ideas, but the writers' skills and forethought were lacking. Thousands of dropped stories, thousands of abandoned ideas, thousands of just pure garbage from trolls or those just wanting to put an idea out there no matter how poor. When they improve it's a blessing, and a moment of quiet pride to see that growrg. But many don't, for various reasons. And then, once in awhile, you find a gem. Maybe it's just a glimmer, just a corner of a shine on a lump of coal. But after taking it, and carefully washing it, and polishing it, you realize you've found a truly beautiful and valuable thing. I've been here on Web novel for a few months now, and it's only now, with this fic, that I'm so immensely glad that I stayed and kept sifting through the coal of the many many stories on here. Yes, great ideas. Yes, wonderful storytelling. But they've just been failing to really keep me enthralled in the story. Because of translation issues, poor grammar, or just straight up using words incorrectly. It kinda takes you out of the story to even figure out what was just said. This fic may not be perfect, but it certainly has caused me to feel gratified that I stayed here, and excited to find more of such inspired writing. It's a great quality work that I'll happily keep following and eagerly look forward to everyday. And not to be morbid or depressing, but, in case we don't keep our health. Or life takes you away from writing. I just want you to understand and keep in mind. I'm grateful for your effort, and time, and diligence. Thank you for the story.
Couldn’t figure if the MC was a girl or guy. They are twins, which maKE reader first thought is that MC is a girl. But actually a boy. At chapter 1
Pretty interesting for an original story. If you like the system type it fits the bill. Also a plus is that none of the chapters are blocked and their is a lot to read.
I'm really enjoying this book. I love how the system doesn't just give him everything he actually has to work for it a little bit. The writing of the book has a few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that really takes away from the story. So far the story is well thought out.
The wait is getting a little long but I will continue to support this book because it is very well written. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp