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Wonderful story to read and every new chapter always amazes me with different scenarios and characters. Storyline is not confusing and easy to understand the main moral of the story. This novel will surely make your imagination about the other world interesting and mysterious. Not forgetting about the comedies that makes this story more exciting. Keep up the good work!
I Am literally confused from the start, the conversation feels like a joke, the settings? All over the place, Character? A Retarded?/Naive type?, Story Development? None, Well I Judge Writing Quality by the story line So i guess the best word for this novel would be "Confusing"
Trash. At chapter 4, MC awakes to find some hot chick holding a sword to his neck. It turns out she is a general and disguises herself as a man to be accepted in the kingdoms army. Her name is Emilia. The very next fxcking chapter, MC proposes to her. She runs away shy. Chapter 6, MC tells her he will get strong for her and that they can love each other forever. It's literally been a few hours and the MC's jump from figuring out this magical world to jumping on. a marriage to a stranger you just met is so insane for a plot/char development. By chapter 22, now he has a harem. A princess joined and he must marry her first for the kingdom. It just continues to get even worse. Don't bother.
Wonderful story to read and every new chapter always amazes me with different scenarios and characters. Storyline is not confusing and easy to understand the main moral of the story. This novel will surely make your imagination about the other world interesting and mysterious. Not forgetting about the comedies that makes this story more exciting. Keep up the good work!
I Am literally confused from the start, the conversation feels like a joke, the settings? All over the place, Character? A Retarded?/Naive type?, Story Development? None, Well I Judge Writing Quality by the story line So i guess the best word for this novel would be "Confusing"
Trash. At chapter 4, MC awakes to find some hot chick holding a sword to his neck. It turns out she is a general and disguises herself as a man to be accepted in the kingdoms army. Her name is Emilia. The very next fxcking chapter, MC proposes to her. She runs away shy. Chapter 6, MC tells her he will get strong for her and that they can love each other forever. It's literally been a few hours and the MC's jump from figuring out this magical world to jumping on. a marriage to a stranger you just met is so insane for a plot/char development. By chapter 22, now he has a harem. A princess joined and he must marry her first for the kingdom. It just continues to get even worse. Don't bother.