Reviews of Supreme Martial System by OmnipotentDad - Webnovel

LV 6

DingDongSong

It is a pretty enjoyable reading and I highly recommend reading this story to everyone. I did not regret giving this one a high rate at all because it has me hooked up to it haha from the start 😝

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Zara1998

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AbrahamDamping

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LV 11

CocoaButter

I don't know why it is has high rated reviews. The MC is simply dim witted. Retarded for life, I'm not joking. The system idea was golden but unfortunately the master is so dumb and to be frank a cu*ckold. Everyone in this novel is cringy starting from the father to the side characters. Please for the sake of our intelligence add 'no common sense' as a tag. The most dumbest novel I have read so far.

LV 14

_Transcendent

Well, Omipotent Dad, if you do read this review( I bet you mostly won't). I like your story regardless of the bad structure, grammar and incomplete World Building. I still like it. Even though I feel that the story is sometimes rushed, it is okay and it keeps me going to read. I understand that expecting a perfect grammar, perfect spelling,perfect world building, perfect character design, perfect plot is bull ****. So, I don't do that. Even if your story has what are commonly pointed as "Flaws", it was still interesting to me. I don't give a damn because reading your story gave me a good time, so I will give you a good review. Cheers, Man. It kept me curious the till the latest chapter. It can be considered to be a good achievement as an author who just started writing. Congrats. I hope to have something better to read from you in the future.

LV 11

ModifiedSpartan

Good.......................................................................................................................................................................

LV 11

killermonk89

I liked the novel at first it was really original for me but then you got sucked into the(it's an eastern novel so it needs to have a harem) trope that I really hate he got married to a girl he just met because she protected his wife and he did not even know that he was agreeing to marry her because he's (stupid) that's another thing every thing that happens you give an excuse that the mc is stupid for every thing he is a 30 years old man and he doesn't even know about marriage traditions like bedding the wife. Overall if you like harem and a really unique storyline(mostly) then I recommend it I only dropped because of the harem and how you implemented it.

LV 4

vlaka

The invaders seems like a rehashed version of the protoss in starcraft... zeratul even made an appearance... The author just separated him into 3 character... There was even an archon..... ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 13

Jean_Leleu

I recently discover and i'm surprised, in a good sense. The background is good (maybe more clarification ) and overall i'm quite satisfied. Thank you for this discovering.

LV 14

_Transcendent

Cant blame u for anything i didnt like but i do praise you for everything i liked.thanks author.u r awesome.live well. I hope u can continue this novel.

LV 10

ggbman

He got strong way to quickly plus his cultivation should be around the same as his strength. I tried to read the story but after his power up I couldn't do it. I can only drop this story.

LV 5

jackiechann

uTTER trash starting chapter 30+/ the novel was going good before the author decided to throw a curveball and introduce retarded aliens and gothic lolis

LV 5

DestinyD

Please update this a little at least 4 chapter/week please do reply. I await your answer my humble sir. .........................................................................

LV 13

StressByMortals

I read and read then I continue to read and all of a sudden mc became a lord or supreme whatever...-.-. And meditation a year and half nothing have happened, but when mc woke up all of a sudden Alien attack ?

LV 5

TheFoundingTitan

I AM WAITING THIS NOVEL TO BE THE BEST!! I LOVE TO READ THIS NOVEL. IT MAKE ME TO THINK ABOUT THE NEXT CHAPTER. THANKS FOR CREATED THIS NOVEL!!!

LV 6

great_ancestor

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Zidane_Cloud

Good story __________________ __________(__)_ _(__)::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::: ::::::::::;;;;;; ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; ;;;;!!! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!( == ===℅

LV 14

DreamLord

I like how random it all is! keep up do good work ................................................................................. ................................................................................. .................................................................................

LV 5

IOnlyEatDinner

Decent but could use better punctuations, grammar, and spelling. Seeing comments all the time inside "(" and ")", including details that should have been put in the paragraph is very frustrating and ruins the immersion.

LV 4

Seventailord

This is a mess i still dont know how to expain it it just fell missing somthing too many little detail you miss out and story go to fast not worth my time

LV 4

Grass_Porridge

As I defended you on one of your reviews I felt the need to give one of my own. While I do think this is not all that good I felt the need to give some constructive criticism. Get someone to double check your work that knows English MUCH better than you. Also someone who could check over your stuff in a more subjective light and give some suggestions and corrections. If you do get someone to do those make sure that those that check your work only give suggestions about the writing and maybe minor things. Not things to do with the plot (as little as there may be) and other things that have more importance than ****** spelling and grammar. That is all.

LV 4

Wasavi

As beta as it gets .................................................................................................................................................................................. Fuck 140 characters

LV 13

Daoist_Void

I admire your hard work. My head's bowed down for you, man. Writing for hours and hours just to think of new ideas, I understand it. Just remind yourself to take a break sometimes.

LV 4

TheTrollMaster

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM GIVE MEEEEE A HAREEEEEEEEMMMMMMMM THE LARGEST MOST BEAUTIFUL HAREM AND THE MOST LOYAL

LV 15

Saint

Honestly, I gave up, way too much casual way of talk in the novel, I could skip the fact that the grammar is crap, but the fact that everything seems like it comes from a 5y old uneducated brat make it really hard to focus and read, all the "Ah ah ah!!!" and so on at every sentences are really annoying..

LV 6

PinkBunny

This is one of those novels that you find randomly and fall helplessly in love with the world that the author imagined. Unlike other novels which you will binge read and then forget about in a few weeks, this is honestly one of the few good original novels where you will camp everyday for another chapter, excited from what joys it may bring you. Characters are carefully build up and the story development has a nice ce pace where the MC is not too OP nor too weak. In terms of power progression it is the generic power up every battle, however the author intergrates interesting factors in the progression, adding an element of uncertainty. The world is just....... extraordinary, you may never know where the next setting would be! One of the greatest original novel I have ever read (and I read a lot!), a dedicated author and an awesome fan following to boot! You cannot ask for a better environment to start your journey inside Supreme Martial System (aka SMS). I await for you to join in in an journey that you will never forget (only if you have issues with multiple realms and harems) !!!! ENJOY! I know I did!!!!! :3 *Pink Bunny our* >_<

LV 5

GreatOverlord

Sorry for giving this bad rating, because im being hinest that i gave it a bad rating because of the things but i STILL LOVE THIS NOVEL, AND ANYONE WHO HATES IT CAN SUCK MY DICK!!