Chương 2: Meeting the King.
As he comes to, Yao Yuan is surprised to realise he is not still in the courtyard at home. He looks to his side and realises he is being dragged by two men towards a grand city.
He feels a cold breeze on his skin and realises he is in Spiritual form. He turns to his right and look at one of the men in the face. Surprisingly, he cannot see the mans face.
"Hey!!who are you? Let me go? Where am I?" he blurts out a series of questions at the man.
"Hey kid! You better be quite! one question at a time." the man on the left says.
After receiving a response from his left he decides to look to his left.
"Aaaargh! Youuuu... areeee!! you are horse-faced Ma Mian!!! am I dead?" he asks as he passes out yet again.
Paa!Paa! Paa! Three slaps land on his cheek.
"Ouuch!Ouuch!" he groans, "why did you do that?"
Horse-faced Ma Mian looks at him then delightfully smiles, "We are here, kid. Wake up, since you know me, you should know where we are, dead men don't sleep."
Still recovering from the three slaps, Yao Yuan struggles as he tries to come to sense with what is happening. He was supposed to be at his awakening ceremony yet here he was with Horse-faced Ma Mian and a person who looked like Bull-headed Niu Tou. As a young man full of vibrant dreams and aspirations how can he willing.
"How did I die?" he asks. This really does puzzle him.
"Bad luck, bad luck," Ma Mian says shaking his head.
"Let our boss explain everything to you when you meet him."
As they enter the grand city, he sees various ghosts walking around in chains as horned devils whip them to hurry along.
"How dare you, I am an exalted Immortal! How dare you whip me!!" the ghost proclaims.
"All who come here are equal, so pipe down!!" the horned devil proclaims then whips him again.
The grand city is Fengdu City. He is amazed by the sheer size of the city and all the grand buildings. While the atmosphere is gloomy, the sheer magnificence of the city amazes him.
A tall Pagoda towers over the City, with an awe inspiring title, Yama Palace.
As they enter the building, various thoughts race through his mind, as sadness and grief overwhelm him.
The realisation of ones mortality is very heart-wrenching. Especially if that realisation comes after death. Dead men feel nothing but regret, for there is rarely any satisfaction in death.
Only the disappointment for what one did and didnt do in life.
Thus he proceeds down the palace corridor to meet his judgement from the one man all men dread, Yama.
"Come in." an imperious voice sound in the corridor.
He walks through the 10metre door, to his judgement.
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DestructionSaint 2nd chapter. Just realised how hard it is to transform and distil one's thoughts into a good story. anyway here is one more for the road.
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