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Pretty good, but was dropped or on hiatus for over a year with no warning or why they dropped it. other then that it was a great story and a great character.
The mc is stupid as hell. He is gets mad at everyone for a good reason and then crawl back to them with an apology. He can't stick to his decisions. SPOILERS HERE:- He gets angry at his friends (blind faith in the village) hokage(manipulate him, could not control him, expelled him), and then comes back to them begging. He is just like a puppet for his friends. He decided that hidden villages, are not fair to take even malicious missions, so they need to be eradicated. Then he suddenly comes back, say sorry to everyone, gets hitched. He makes Minato come to life, he also betrayed the MC, he just don't care. he got too much power, didn't do anything special, just acts like a lapdog for his friends.
I'm so sure that I finished this fanfiction but I can't remember it so I'll probably read it again But can you tell me if there is romance in this novel because I really don't enjoy novels without it And if so is it a tragic romance because I HATE that Because that's why I might have stopped reading it Maybe I don't remember it because I tend to drop fanfictions with tragic endings for the MC and heroine
Ehhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its fine
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Story was really good and I enjoyed reading it untill he got his charisma boosted and just went awall and then he became a god..... Like The Fuck it was rushed and unnecessary. In the end I finished reading all the chapters and was like after chapter 50 the rest if the chapters are a waste of time
One of the best fan fiction that I read. Very well written characters with the author who clearly knows a thing or two about the source material.
Nice in beginning then turns boring As boring that you will start thinking that you are reading the same novel Low charisma whole latter chapters are the wailing of my about his ****ty charisma 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😏😴😴it's gets this much boring
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I love the actual psychology used and the development of an socially inept character due to his choices. The long chapter also make it worthwhile. For those who read this should definitely enjoy thoroughly.
Exp experience with a competitive fist person shooter the game was only one step in the ritual xp xp xp xp xpxp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
I love it! I can't get enough. I'm waiting for more k'mon don't keep us waiting. Seriously this is a good story. It has bits of everything.love, action, betrayel, humor.
much wow very cool acceptable need 140 but haz 420 very much cool much very wow i haz forgotten thy doge memes pls send help i've been kidnapped
Just up to a few chapters in and i can tell MC is a really f****d up character.How can charisma affect his personality when hes already a grown ass thirty year old man.It's plain COMMON SENSE.He should at least be average in interacting with other people instead of failing miserably.I mean come on the guy should at least know know how to interact with other people in his his previous life or is is there some part in the story that he doesnt talk anyone else until he is transmigratted.I know author is trying to make it as realistic as possible but this is over-realistic. Well at least its good to know that he'll fix later on but this something that doesn't coincide with 'common dollar'
con i get continuation of this book. i like it very much very interested in future chapters.i think orochimaru should be revived for future chapters as his involvement is very little.and a bit of romance in the story ..
I really really loved this story very nice fanfiction, very cool the way that Naruto, Fallout and RPG Games in general were integrated I loved it, and can't wait for more chapters
I like the plot. Nice arc by the author. Hope next arc will be released soon. And I have the 140 characters rule, so I'm just gonna fill this review in.
Best book so far. I really like the way the characters develop and the way they react to events. I hope the story keeps those elements in the novel.
i don't know why this novel is not getting much attention and ranked 99+ its ridiculous this novel needs its on ad showing on different sites and front page of this qidian the fact that other naruto fanbased novels are doing better then this when the rest seem sloppy made with quick montone dialogue fast power ups to where its boring and no substance to the storys its appalling everyone needs to put your stones into this to get it known
Pretty good overall. Nice developement with the emotions and the system. Characters are played out pretty well. Also need moreeeee updatesss
first off i love it love everything about it i love how its not based around naruto yes he is in it and they are friends and he does help him but its minor compared to the story the story is centered around mc and his own team i love that he is awkward with socializing or reading people reminds me of sai and he was one of my fav char always pissing people off and not knowing how lol the only flaw i have with him and its extremly minor but it completly bugs the **** out of me like really bad is he hates being called kid he gets extremely defensive and even aggressive about it i find that stupid yes hes a grown man in a kids body so what im almost 30 i still get called kid so what like i said just find it ridiculous considering its not even an insult anyway 5 stars quality is excellent even if there is some info dumps it doesnt lose me like other authors u skip a sentence or paragraph because it seems meaningless this doesnt have that i read it all updates i'm not positive on how often but the chapters themselves are 2 to 3 times the size of normal chapters of other novels so that's great story development he is in op mc but the way the author did it was great im sick of others making themselves so powerful they 1 shot bosses so there isnt any real danger or action involved in fights while this novel yes he does have a perk that seems to make him unkillable it doesnt change the fact of the danger or fights are on full display well i have written enough lol great story keep up the good work i am a fan for sure
Long ass chapters, i like it 140 chars ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write and update it more often please please
in this work is not an interesting protagonist. and besides the behavior of the protagonist bends incomprehensibly why in the direction of romantics.
If you like this than read “In Another World with Naruto system It has 300 plus chapter and I think it’s better Haven’t read the story even so I can’t if this is better than IAWNS
Just started reading and it's a lot of fun to actually imagine being a full blown shinobi. Only read 7 chapters and already into it. My power stone goes to this!
This is surprisingly good and I’ve never watched nauruto, the mc go s through actual difficulties, and has problem sheer power can’t overcome, I loved it
at least i think he can do fix the main naruto plot ez ly. just said, "neee naruto, do you want to do somehting fun *winks*" and it's done, he can literally eat popcorn at the cut-scene. currently at 13 chapter. but damn that genjutsu catfish me for the Brotherhood
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I tried to give it a chance but i cant do it .Reading a novel with naruto world as the background you expect an mc who will train hard and have the atitude of a shinobi what you get is a retard that thinks he is playing a game talking and complaining to himself all the time ....
This the best naruto fan fic I have ever read with added video game elements. Need more chapters. Probably use a better pictucer for the novel.
Pretty good, but was dropped or on hiatus for over a year with no warning or why they dropped it. other then that it was a great story and a great character.
The mc is stupid as hell. He is gets mad at everyone for a good reason and then crawl back to them with an apology. He can't stick to his decisions. SPOILERS HERE:- He gets angry at his friends (blind faith in the village) hokage(manipulate him, could not control him, expelled him), and then comes back to them begging. He is just like a puppet for his friends. He decided that hidden villages, are not fair to take even malicious missions, so they need to be eradicated. Then he suddenly comes back, say sorry to everyone, gets hitched. He makes Minato come to life, he also betrayed the MC, he just don't care. he got too much power, didn't do anything special, just acts like a lapdog for his friends.
I'm so sure that I finished this fanfiction but I can't remember it so I'll probably read it again But can you tell me if there is romance in this novel because I really don't enjoy novels without it And if so is it a tragic romance because I HATE that Because that's why I might have stopped reading it Maybe I don't remember it because I tend to drop fanfictions with tragic endings for the MC and heroine
Ehhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its fine
Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍👍🏽👍🏻👍🏽👍🏽👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Story was really good and I enjoyed reading it untill he got his charisma boosted and just went awall and then he became a god..... Like The Fuck it was rushed and unnecessary. In the end I finished reading all the chapters and was like after chapter 50 the rest if the chapters are a waste of time
One of the best fan fiction that I read. Very well written characters with the author who clearly knows a thing or two about the source material.
Nice in beginning then turns boring As boring that you will start thinking that you are reading the same novel Low charisma whole latter chapters are the wailing of my about his ****ty charisma 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😏😴😴it's gets this much boring
Tiết lộ Spoiler I love the actual psychology used and the development of an socially inept character due to his choices. The long chapter also make it worthwhile. For those who read this should definitely enjoy thoroughly.
Exp experience with a competitive fist person shooter the game was only one step in the ritual xp xp xp xp xpxp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
I love it! I can't get enough. I'm waiting for more k'mon don't keep us waiting. Seriously this is a good story. It has bits of everything.love, action, betrayel, humor.
much wow very cool acceptable need 140 but haz 420 very much cool much very wow i haz forgotten thy doge memes pls send help i've been kidnapped
Just up to a few chapters in and i can tell MC is a really f****d up character.How can charisma affect his personality when hes already a grown ass thirty year old man.It's plain COMMON SENSE.He should at least be average in interacting with other people instead of failing miserably.I mean come on the guy should at least know know how to interact with other people in his his previous life or is is there some part in the story that he doesnt talk anyone else until he is transmigratted.I know author is trying to make it as realistic as possible but this is over-realistic. Well at least its good to know that he'll fix later on but this something that doesn't coincide with 'common dollar'
con i get continuation of this book. i like it very much very interested in future chapters.i think orochimaru should be revived for future chapters as his involvement is very little.and a bit of romance in the story ..
I really really loved this story very nice fanfiction, very cool the way that Naruto, Fallout and RPG Games in general were integrated I loved it, and can't wait for more chapters
I like the plot. Nice arc by the author. Hope next arc will be released soon. And I have the 140 characters rule, so I'm just gonna fill this review in.
Best book so far. I really like the way the characters develop and the way they react to events. I hope the story keeps those elements in the novel.
i don't know why this novel is not getting much attention and ranked 99+ its ridiculous this novel needs its on ad showing on different sites and front page of this qidian the fact that other naruto fanbased novels are doing better then this when the rest seem sloppy made with quick montone dialogue fast power ups to where its boring and no substance to the storys its appalling everyone needs to put your stones into this to get it known
Pretty good overall. Nice developement with the emotions and the system. Characters are played out pretty well. Also need moreeeee updatesss
first off i love it love everything about it i love how its not based around naruto yes he is in it and they are friends and he does help him but its minor compared to the story the story is centered around mc and his own team i love that he is awkward with socializing or reading people reminds me of sai and he was one of my fav char always pissing people off and not knowing how lol the only flaw i have with him and its extremly minor but it completly bugs the **** out of me like really bad is he hates being called kid he gets extremely defensive and even aggressive about it i find that stupid yes hes a grown man in a kids body so what im almost 30 i still get called kid so what like i said just find it ridiculous considering its not even an insult anyway 5 stars quality is excellent even if there is some info dumps it doesnt lose me like other authors u skip a sentence or paragraph because it seems meaningless this doesnt have that i read it all updates i'm not positive on how often but the chapters themselves are 2 to 3 times the size of normal chapters of other novels so that's great story development he is in op mc but the way the author did it was great im sick of others making themselves so powerful they 1 shot bosses so there isnt any real danger or action involved in fights while this novel yes he does have a perk that seems to make him unkillable it doesnt change the fact of the danger or fights are on full display well i have written enough lol great story keep up the good work i am a fan for sure
Long ass chapters, i like it 140 chars ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please write and update it more often please please
in this work is not an interesting protagonist. and besides the behavior of the protagonist bends incomprehensibly why in the direction of romantics.
If you like this than read “In Another World with Naruto system It has 300 plus chapter and I think it’s better Haven’t read the story even so I can’t if this is better than IAWNS
Just started reading and it's a lot of fun to actually imagine being a full blown shinobi. Only read 7 chapters and already into it. My power stone goes to this!
This is surprisingly good and I’ve never watched nauruto, the mc go s through actual difficulties, and has problem sheer power can’t overcome, I loved it
at least i think he can do fix the main naruto plot ez ly. just said, "neee naruto, do you want to do somehting fun *winks*" and it's done, he can literally eat popcorn at the cut-scene. currently at 13 chapter. but damn that genjutsu catfish me for the Brotherhood
Tiết lộ Spoiler I tried to give it a chance but i cant do it .Reading a novel with naruto world as the background you expect an mc who will train hard and have the atitude of a shinobi what you get is a retard that thinks he is playing a game talking and complaining to himself all the time ....
This the best naruto fan fic I have ever read with added video game elements. Need more chapters. Probably use a better pictucer for the novel.
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