Excellent character development and conversations have a nice flow. I have read up to chapter 16, and the story is progressing at a good pace. A bit of foreknowledge about the world is good to have but not required if you plan on giving this a try. The grammar is good, and the editing makes for a pleasant read.
Keep up the good work! You have my power stone. 👍 🪨
Excellent character development and conversations have a nice flow. I have read up to chapter 16, and the story is progressing at a good pace. A bit of foreknowledge about the world is good to have but not required if you plan on giving this a try. The grammar is good, and the editing makes for a pleasant read. Keep up the good work! You have my power stone. 👍 🪨