[QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS

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Carciphones_02

If I'm rating on my stories, I will give my:- writing quality- 3 star stability of updates- 2 star Story Development- 4 star Character Design - 4 star World Background- 4 star I used Grammarly on my writing, but only the basic ones, so there might be a lot of other mistakes that I didn't know. The stability of updates for my novels suck. That's because I get distracted easily. And also, sometimes I forgot what is the right word to use for a certain activity that results in me watching anime and reading other's novel. I think the story development is pretty good. I have already thought of many scenes and actions and the direction of where this novel will go. But the only thing that dragging me down right now is the stability of updates. For Character design, I think it will be fine If you could give me time to explore and give all of them certain traits that will result in the way they all act. Meaning, they all have reasons for their personality and views on the world. lastly, for the world background, I think only me that can see it now. Because you are supposed to understand the world-building by reading my other novel. But yeah... the updates suck too. That's all. You should rate my novel too so I get to I know which part In the novel that I can fix. This way, I can improve my writing skill and your reading experience at the same time.

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BaeVida

Alright, the move is nice. Your normal system novel and subsided missions. The twist in it is that the MC has to protect and help the villainess while still being close friends of the female lead. Well the villainess herself ain't bad, just a victim of family standards. Then the stupid annoying ball system, that likes to give our MC a headache. My only problem with this book is the grammatical errors. Not much but it should be checked, almost all writers have that. And the update stability, stop being lazy with anime author and write. U would give ur readers an update starvation. Not nice. Anyway nice work, keep it up. Ohh FYI, I think there is future Yuri.

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Pleasedeteme

Hmmm after reading this.. it's decent.. and not bad to read.. specially if you like otome games this is maybe a good read for you. The story develops comically which is indeed at times funny. Also your way of putting cliffhangers got better.. The main character is quiet funny at times.. and her clumsiness makes it a attractive personality traits.. - - - - - Well, improve the grammar by using word document or grammarly as helping hand. Try to make scenes vivid said it again in case Make the story more fluid like water if you want it aggressive you can do so as water goes both ways.. by making dialogues more clearer and also adding inner dialogues more sophisticatly. Make the story more dramatic and add plot twists.. and try to avoid cliche unless you make it skillfully good. Also try not to make the system too op as to make the story more interesting and funny.. Constructive criticism. I hope to see how your writing turns out... signed.. Your Dear Maximus-senpai

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MaxwellKHA

I wish the novel has more chapters. Oh well, into the review. The book is good and all, still for a system story it is fairly decent. I wish there are more twists in the future. I'm waiting for that author.

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Priya_Agrawal_1447

This story is quite unique and fun it also has a bit of yuri and it will take place in several worlds so we will get to have many stories with our mc (≧▽≦)(☆▽☆) I totally loved it and enjoyed very much ❤️ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧(≧▽≦)

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wookie0_

The story was promising I really loved the start of the novel as of soul and body two different things the novel goes very smoothly but there were petty mistakes like punctuation and capitalization And if the writter manages to solve these problems the novel is lit

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daygon_yuuki

The story itself is good and interesting but I feel the system is taking away too much attention from the plot as a whole. I read 10 chapters and I still don't really know what's going on which is weird because why and the reasons are really not clear, or is it a future development? The writing is good but distracting at points and I would really like more details about the background too if it's possible. Maybe I need to read a little more to get all the information I need?

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heyitsbluejay

Thanks for giving me that power stone ages I never I got to thank sorry for taking so long and your book seems really good and I thanks for liking my book

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RiriHeart

Honestly, I had fun reading your story. I just love how Viollete and the ball interact with each other, good combination. The plot is fresh and new, the title itself would really hook the readers's interest. I'll wait for the revelation about the past of Violette. Thumbs Up,Author.

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Shaska

In the end, continue reading and I end up hooking the story, my recommendation is to skip the chapters from 1 to 20 since they are quite bad, from then on the story is entertaining

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cathangingtree

I'm not going but reading the synopsis of the story doesn't make me want to read it but after chapter one I realize I keep reading until the latest chapter that I waiting for the upcoming chapter!![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Kuro_X

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!! LUV LUV LUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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_hestia_

This is a fun read. The way the characters interact and the different dynamics between each character is very interesting and I had fun specially with the first chapter

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DuskArcanist

The very first chapter just had me laughing, and I feel like first chapters are really important the same way first impressions are. The twist of the AI system is pretty refreshing for a transmigration novel, and something I didn't really expect. Its really good already, and I'm hoping you release more chapters soon!

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MokouFriedChicken

How curious... Would recommend to fans of the genre. Grammar has minimal errors, mainly minor spacing issues and othe negligible stuff so don't worry too much. Prose and dialogue flows naturally, making for comfortable reading. Plot is something fairly interesting, piquing my curiosity more than any other stuff I've read so far here. I'll be watching, Author. Keep on writing 👍

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Snowin

Okay, so the first chapter/prologue is very well written. It catches my attention and leaves me thinking "Hmmm.. What's going to happen." I personally don't like system type novels, mainly because I think they are all the same and leave no uniqueness between the other. However, the interactions between the main character and the robot made me want to keep reading more, and more, and more. It was funny, entertaining, and interesting. It really showed the personalities of both, (if a robot can have a personality haha) As far as the writing: Overall pretty good, very minimal grammatical errors, but English isn't my first language either, so reading through this gave no problems what so ever. The only thing I might add is I would love to see some more scene/environment descriptions. There were parts where I understood what was happening, but I had no picture in my head of what I'm looking at. Once again, take all of this from an *******'s opinion, (Me) So I'm just giving my personal thoughts. All in all, great stuff, you got me on board!