wasted opportunity to provide a "Merchat of Death" Class. that wouldve been on point with his ability.
bruh, i cant understand anything. pls improve the translation quality of this. it couldve been average, but now its just trash. it literally feels like someone who barely understands english wrote this yet the opening page has a british flag on it. what kind of lie is this? another classic webnovel lie ofcourse.
bruh you literally have a knight. if the character is stupid, that means the author is either writing a stupid character, or is stupid themselves. i dont hink the mc is supposed to be stupid so that means the author is stupid. stupid author get better jesus. another good concept ruined by a bad writer.
jesus christ, this is the worst copy paste takes 50 chapters for 1 fight scene to happen novel. why even write a novel if its gonna be this shitty. average idea ruined with horrible writing practices.
why wouldnt he just make dissection tools and dissect his enemies like a crazy anatomist like you build him to be. this is hilariously stupid.
paper ninjutsu is not kekkei genkai... its a hiden jutsu
my biggest problem with this is that it has info dump after info dump, fillers with only world building one after another. i dont mind having a novel that expands in its world design, but seriously, not even 50 chapters in, you havent even let the mc get in his mobile base, and youre focusing on world building already? this story should focus on the mc and his mobile base not on some other side characters family background and entire history as well as their ideals and revelations. not to mention there isnt even a proper frame work or general understanding in the world yet youre already sweating the small details. its so borimg and repetetive and im not even in the 50 chapter mark yet. priorities author, priorities.
first of all, if they are easy to predict, why was the mc still a mega virgin in his past life. smh inconsistent
this will definitely be the next big slice of life novel,... until webnovel butchers it like every other good novel they have, and then a hiatus will absolutely destroy whatever speck of potential this story has left. You know, in typical webnovel fashion. i just hope that i get bored by the time that happens so that i wont be hurt as much.
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original Daily Journal Entries
NAME: MIKHAEL SMITH REEVES AGE: 18 SEX: Male FATHER: IVANOV AVER REEVES [deceased] MOTHER: ANGELICA ROBINSON SMITH [deceased] contact no.: XXXX-XXX-XXXX SIBLINGS: JENNIFER SMITH REEVES [deceased] IVAN SMITH REEVES [deceased] EULIA SMITH REEVES [deceased] address: BLK XX, LOT XX, XXXXXX XXXXX SUBD., Casper City As of February 29, 2020, I am an Esper.1 Chs 0 คอลเลกชัน
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In the End, Eternity is just a word
Your author is lazy and has not thought of a synopsis. Why don't you send me one lol2 Chs 0 คอลเลกชัน
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Living in a Modern Superpower Society
"Hmm?" "I seem to have been reincarnated into a modern superpower society??" "I'm a direct descendant of the Gula Family???" Looks like my second life will be anything but boring, hehe. ~~~ The story revolves around Alphonse Gula, a normal person reincarnated into a powerful family in a world dominated by people with superpowers. How will he adapt with his new identity in this unfamiliar world?2 Chs 3 คอลเลกชัน
trash...................................
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