In the future, I think I will only upload five chapters weekly and leave weekends to myself. Writing is fun, but I don't want to burn myself out, and proper rest is needed. So, there will be no chapter tomorrow, but it will start again on Monday. The chapters I write usually have 2k words or more, like this one, which has 5.3k words.
However! Telling and showing that I will seriously try to work on it; thank you for this feedback. It made me realize a lot. I also got a little passive-aggressive in my other comment. However, I do once again want to mention its my first time writing :p
Yes, the summary is enough. This is more of a prologue and basically shows the MC lineage and the sacking stuff, but it is Game of Thrones. The theme itself is dark :p However, I won't write about trauma casually or against the characters I write about; at most, it will be broad, like Chapter 5. It might get close like this sometimes, but I cannot say it wouldn't happen again 100%. At least, I can guarantee that it wouldn't ever succeed. As I mentioned before, I also very much don't like writing it either, lol
She is six; why can't she long for her mother? I also stated that this will be an AU story that includes ages. Daenerys did know her mom for four years, to be exact. It was mentioned in chapter 16 from Illyrio's perspective, and I have not read the books at all; I only watched the T.V. show, which, again, I have mentioned. I feel comfortable writing in the first person; based on my statistics, people enjoy it. Switching to the third person, which I have never tried before, would also feel weird. Finally, this is my fanfiction, my guy; I wrote and posted it here because I wanted to create one. Madara has arrived, but I wanted to make a story. If not, this story would take one chapter, with Madara taking over the world instantly. IDK what else you expected. That's not fanfiction at that point. Anyway, I felt I had been writing this well for an amateur.
I will tell you what happens general idea. I can tell you no trauma happens that you think of, so if you want to read it in full I'll put it here ***SPOILER BELOW**** She has her child taken and is confused; Raymar was betrayed and was working for Tywin. After killing all the guards, he WANTS to force himself upon Olyssia; when she is desperate, the door breaks open, stunning Raymar. Olyssia capitalizes by killing him, but in despair, she kills herself right after to prevent herself from a worse fate. No trauma plot or anything happens. The only trauma is that she knows her husband is most likely dead and her baby is missing. So she dies in grief as a mother. I also don't like writing this type of trauma stuff, but since it happened canonically, I added it to showcase the evil in the Lannister army. So, the rest of the book can be read with confidence. If there is ever such a trauma warning of a major character, and I feel it makes 100% sense, I will find it hard to believe myself. I would put a disclaimer at the start of the chapter.
my bro is ten right now.
I just don't want to fight against all of Essos; if I don't need to, I won't, but if I do. I need at least the Mangekyo.
TV · scullhaven
I am 21 chapters in from 1st person for like 95% of the story, swapping would be confusing, plus I can't write that well in third either. is there a reason why you asked ?
to be honest i am not sure canonically, but here In my story he will be the biggest.
Game of Thrones: Ghost of the Uchiha
TV · scullhaven