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Littlecoin
Littlecoin
1 months ago
Replied to WickedCat

I can see what you mean about the death flags and the anxiety it might be causing—my intention was to build tension and keep the stakes high, but I definitely don't want it to feel overwhelming or too predictable. I'll keep this in mind moving forward and work on balancing the tension with some relief or surprises. Thanks for the review!

Littlecoin
Littlecoin
1 months ago
Replied to Someh

All the chapters so far are around 1,000 words, but I feel that might not be enough for a single chapter. It might end up creating a sense of having too many chapters before we get to our main focus. Also, I’m not sure how much longer it’ll take, but I’d like to wait a little longer before settling into the core themes. Thanks for the review though, it really helps.

  • Scarred Glory:Field of Redemption original

    Scarred Glory:Field of Redemption

    Sports ACTION GENIUS REVENGE HIGHIQ EGOIST COLD-BLOODED CALM THUG

    Leon Aschemist was never supposed to rise. Shaped by a broken home and drawn into a life of crime from an early age, his future seemed carved in stone—until one glimmer of hope emerged: his older brother, Adélard Aschemist. Known to the world as a football prodigy and a beacon of excellence, Adélard became Leon’s guiding light, a symbol of everything good and powerful that football could offer. But while Adélard ascended to glory, Leon was left in the shadows, struggling against his darker impulses and the brutal streets that threatened to swallow him whole. Torn between the path his brother blazed and the chains of his past, Leon’s journey is one of raw ambition and deep-seated rivalry, fueled by the desire not only to escape his past but to one day stand alongside Adélard—not just as his brother, but as his equal. "Scarred Glory: Fields of Redemption" follows Leon’s tumultuous rise from being a notorious street brawler to becoming the world’s most celebrated football star. But as his fame grows, so do the ghosts of his past, threatening to unravel the life he’s fought so hard to rebuild. With the weight of his past bearing down on him and his uncle’s legacy casting a long shadow, Leon must confront not just his opponents on the field but the demons that seek to drag him back into the darkness. Can Leon finally break free and carve out his own name in the annals of football history, or will the scars of his past eclipse the glory he seeks?

    24 Chs 16 คอลเลกชัน