See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
thank you :)
Thank you for your presence and feedback. Going forward, I will try to incorporate all the suggestions you've given me.
I apologize if there are any shortcomings in the story, but I welcome your feedback gladly. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
Firstly, I’d like to apologize as the writer if there are any mistakes or inconsistencies in the writing, this is my first time writing, and I always strive to give my best. Thank you for pointing out the errors in my story. If possible, I’d love for you to read more of my work so you can understand it better and give me more feedback in the future. Thank you!
Ethan carefully descended the mountain, the wounds on his body throbbing with every step. Though he was still injured, the power from the dragon's heart he had consumed gave him an unmatched boost.
Fantasy · HAYKLZ
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
but if you want to read longer... all the questions will slowly be answered... I'm trying new and unique ideas for this novel. I hope you're happy with what I've created.
I simply wrote what was on my mind at the time, and back then, I thought that just writing was enjoyable. Over time, I became accustomed to it and started to really enjoy creating fictional stories.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
The Greedy Eater with Strength
Fantasy · HAYKLZ