The concept is good, The grammar is good, The mc is good so far. Just hope that you don't drop it like others and if you did I am calling diddy.......................................
Actually I be updating this fic on my other acc "Lord_Aesir" So, Please read it from that acc. :)
Though it might be too early to give this fic a review but meh I do it anyways. But author remember if I see you turn the mc into a simp or an righteous idiot. I will change my review to an automatic 1-star.
Yeah.
"I won’t add another reincarnated guy. I just wanted a powerful enemy for the MC, since once he gets his vibranium body ready, it would be impossible for any MCU character to stop him. So I decided to use Death as that enemy because, well, she hates anyone who cheats death—aka her. All good now?
The figure isn't a reincarnated but death of the marvel comics.
{A/N: Who's ready for a cosmic war?
Anime & Comics · Pepe_
Actually, that figure isn’t an OC but Death, who hates the MC because, well, you know how many times he’s cheated death. Anyway, I’m going to remove this part.
Why?
Maybe both
"[Broly Template]? You must have some affinity with the monkeys." He said with a smile, causing me to be confused once more. But he didn't explain and had me spin the wheel once more.
DC: I'm The Ultimate Lifeform
Anime & Comics · itachi1010