Okay so If she ‘doesn’t have a wolf’, how is she able to have advanced enough sense of smell to scent other wolves.
Mrs. Elkins' pats my hand as a customer enters the store, never noticing how I tense at the familiar scent. "That's great, dear. Excuse me. I'll take care of her. You finish with the books."
Tangled in Moonlight: Unshifted
Fantasy · Lenaleia
lol, I honestly can’t tell if he’s trolling him or being genuine.
Gan Guoyang, surprised, said, "You're Stevenson? Sorry, I didn't pay attention to names. The strategy we set up before the game was targeting Bonner."
The Golden Age of Basketball
Sports · Sheep that do not like eating grass
Change ‘while’ to ‘and’ or ‘and soon after’
After checking all their vitals were fine, she handed both of them a food pill. Vorden took the pill immediately while Quinn did the same.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Put on some clothes Is more correct
After seeing himself in the mirror, Evan wore some clothes and made some noodles to eat.
Necromancer Of The Shadows
Fantasy · Zero_writer
‘Feet’ not feat
Not using his full strength Vorden repelled the ball at a decent speed heading towards Quinn, at that moment he lifted the shadow from his feat to form a type of wall. As the two made an impact, the ball seemed to slow down.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
While Quinn stood around only ten meters away This reads better
He crept up slowly to Vorden in the stands going between the chairs, and it seemed his skill was working. While Quinn was stood around 10 meters apart, it looked like Vorden had no idea he was there.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Do I hear Peter Pan lol
[Allows the user to control their own Shadow]
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
lol so that’s where the crystal went
To the side of the screen, it showed his inventory, where he had 16 basic tier crystals, one intermediate crystal and also an advanced tier crystal as well. He didn't know when he had obtained them, but at some point, he must have done.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Could mean first blood, first kill, or of a particular bloodline
[Level 6 shadow book, can only be learnt by those that have been Blooded]
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Yep
I stroke the husky's soft fur, feeling a strange connection to the creature. Its eyes seem to bore into me, and I can't shake the sense that there's more to this dog than meets the eye. Still, I shake my head and tell Mrs. Elkins, "No collar."
Tangled in Moonlight: Unshifted
Fantasy · Lenaleia