Luna15_ReaderX

Luna15_ReaderX

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Just both a reader and author of poems that's starting to get into writing novels and hopes that my books will make a positive impact in the community.

2024-07-23 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Philippines
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Luna15_ReaderX
Luna15_ReaderX
2 months ago
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It was slightly confusing at first to understand the universe or world they're in, but it was covered by the compelling story. The writing style was pretty good as well but I do hope it gets updated soon

Luna15_ReaderX
Luna15_ReaderX
2 months ago
Posted

The book is fairly good, it is personally not my taste when it comes to the genre, but it did not affect on how I rate this book. The book follows a usual story trope where there is a lost princess, and the story focuses on her journey to finding her real family and bloodline. I have read a lot of books with the same trope or plot, it will be difficult to give the book a more unique story compared to the ones that me and countless of readers have already read. Lastly, the writing style. It needs a more professional use of words, and proper use of dialogue. There is nothing wrong with this type of writing style, but if you want a more broad and mature audience you would need to shift to a more formal or professional writing style

  • Fleeting Memories original

    Fleeting Memories

    LGBT+ R18 SLICEOFLIFE BETRAYAL REVENGE TEEN DRAMATIC ABANDONED YURI LOVETRIANGLE FRIENDSTOLOVERS

    Joanne Berkley's Diary, DO NOT READ I'm a straight A student who stumbles upon the queen bee on my first day in a new school. New school means, a new school environment, and a new environment means, I must relearn the school's teenage politics. Little did I know, that this new school will not only give new memories and friends, but also a new wave of emotions that will clash onto me as I gets tangled in a web of drama. Cover Credits: Mystic Wings Design Discord: angel_faye

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