Thank you for your genuine review. This was my starting phase, and it’s my first story, so I wasn’t too familiar with how to write effectively. However, I believe you’ll enjoy it more as you go further because, after finishing season 1(After chapter 12), I really focused on improving the quality of the scenes and character development.
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ohh really it was like that because of readers simplicity when readers read a new book than it take time to adapt to their way of telling stories that's why i wrote it in a way that every reader can understand what those line means
"Books, you say?"
Fantasy · Hemal_Prajapati
because he is 12 bro tell when was it that you know that you have cabine on your house roof he was a kid man be mature 😕
"Yes, we have a library on the third floor. If you want, you can go there and read some of the books. They might help you understand how to use your wind power. What do you say?"
Fantasy · Hemal_Prajapati
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I realised it now
Arthur took a deep breath, calmed himself, and said, "I love you."
Fantasy · Hemal_Prajapati
Idk really I just write chapters and views keep coming 😅 I guess it because I applied for contact and when you do that I guess your reach increases
He is dead 😅
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Stormbound: Chronicles of the Wind Mage
Fantasy · Hemal_Prajapati