alright, the story is actually good so far...
the way the character is described is perfect and just like that the other essential things like pace and descriptions are good too..
the only problem is... why's there so many 'I' in that thing T-T
my poor lil eyes... they were tortured by I's
but yea aside that, if you're cool with reading first person books, then this book is for ya!
just a heads up that this story has little to no connections to either the real world/countries such as china or as such, neither the chinese cliches... just because a characters name was derived from a certain lore, it doesnt mean that the story in itself belongs to that lore.
its a pure fantasy with everything that you could ask for.
[Warning: This thing contains a bit too much bloodshed... so...]
yes u saw the tags right, this is a mix of cultivation and tower so expect both the magic and cultivation in this.
Villainous MC with a Personal system? if thats what u were looking for, you already got it!
check the book out.
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Ye Tian was once just an ordinary human from Earth, living a mundane life. But fate had other plans for him.
He was mysteriously transmigrated into the world of cultivation, a place where strength reigned supreme and power could shape reality. In this world, Ye Tian embarked on a dark path... the path of demons.
After trillions of years of cultivation, he ascended to the pinnacle of power, becoming the Absolute Demon, feared and revered across the entire cosmos.
His beauty was angelic, but beneath that flawless appearance lay the heart of a ruthless killer... a demon hidden in the guise of an angel.
Countless races trembled at his name. He was a cold-blooded, merciless force of destruction, known for slaughtering without hesitation.
Entire worlds were laid to waste at his feet. His cruelty knew no bounds, and his reign of terror spanned eons. Yet, for all his strength and dominance, there was no satisfaction.
Ye Tian grew weary of the endless killing and ruling. Standing at the top, alone and bored, life had become empty... a never-ending cycle of bloodshed that no longer stirred his emotions.
But everything changed one fateful day.
In the blink of an eye, Ye Tian found himself back in his old body, back on Earth, as if the trillions of years he had spent cultivating were nothing more than a distant dream. However, this Earth was not the one he remembered. The world had changed.
A giant Tower had appeared... like something out of the fictional fantasy stories he had read in his past life.
And just as Ye Tian began to grasp this new world, a system window appeared before him...
[Connecting to the Tower.]
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If you're reading this, chances are you’re drawn to the allure of Eastern-themed stories... tales of ancient clans, mystical arts, and the relentless pursuit of immortality.
Now, imagine waking up one day to find yourself reincarnated into the very world you’ve always longed to experience, A world where martial prowess and cultivation define one’s destiny.
You’ve been reborn into one of the four major clans, a place of power, prestige, and unimaginable resources. It’s everything you’ve ever wanted.
Or so it seems.
But there's a cruel twist to this dream-like fate. Despite being surrounded by unparalleled talent and limitless potential, you discover that you can't cultivate. Not a single trace of spiritual energy will respond to your call. In a world where the strong thrive and the weak perish, you're nothing more than a powerless mortal.
Imagine the scorn you’d face... every sneer, every whispered insult, every condescending gaze. As the sole member of your clan who cannot harness the power of the elements, you become the laughingstock, the shame of a family that has produced immortal powerhouses for millennia.
Would you still cling to this world, or would you long for the ordinary life you once knew?
For Feng Chen, this nightmare was a living reality. Born into the revered Feng Clan, his destiny was supposed to be one of greatness.
Yet, for 14 excruciating years, he struggled in vain, unable to cultivate even the smallest amount of spiritual energy. Every day was a reminder of his inadequacy, every encounter a painful lesson in humility.
His name, once spoken with pride, became synonymous with failure... a blemish on the illustrious history of his lineage.
Finally, the clan could bear it no longer. Stripped of his name, his rights, and his dignity, Feng Chen was cast out, exiled from the only home he had ever known.
With nothing left to live for, he wandered into the wilderness, seeking solitude in a desolate cave where he could quietly fade away from the world that had forsaken him.
As he lay on the cold stone, his body broken and his spirit shattered, he closed his eyes, ready to embrace the darkness. But just as the last flicker of hope was about to die out, something extraordinary happened…
*Ding!*
– Activating Seclusion System!
But who would've known... That this System wasn't an Ordinary one Either...
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[ GRAVE WARNING- this book is only for those who are patient enough.. if u do not have patience, please do not read this book cuz the starting chaps are nothing but to build up story and to test the readers patience.]
Just letting you guys know that its a slow paced story with a system that focuses on making its host train in seclusion… but ofcourse thats not all to it as that would make everything so boring no? So expect many adventures…
And yes he will have a harem (sigh… poor lil me)
yes the System of the story is unique altho seemingly normal at first, it'll show its true colours in the story..
Also, the MC might feel a bit bratty and spoiled at first but trust my cookin..
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Imagine possessing enough power that even the so called Immortal Gods kneel before you in fear.
The Heavens, which ruled over the myriad realms since the beginning, treats you like their God.
A single word from you can alter the course of nature.
With just a thought, you can destroy the entire cosmos and recreate it anew.
Such power would satisfy anyone, no?
But Feng Liang was different. Despite having lived for millions of eons, attaining realms that no one knew existed, making the heavens kneel before him, and even after creating the cosmos from scratch after destroying the old one as if it were a mere twig, he was not satisfied with his powers.
What he desired was something more. He tried everything that one could imagine.
Consuming hundreds of thousands of legendary Dao fruits and elixirs...
Refining Thousands of God-level treasures...
Cultivating Cosmic Qi through his body and soul for millions of years...
And even obtaining merits from the heavens.
Yet, he still couldn't notice even a slight change in his cultivation. He realized that the problem was his own body. His constitution wasn't strong enough to support any more qi, but he could do nothing about his body at that point.
After thinking and preparing for hundreds of thousands of years, he made a momentous decision.
"I shall give up this life and rise to power from the scratch once again!"
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Seclusion System: Exile to Ascendance
Eastern · WanderingShadow1