I_B_2676

I have no problem with Maratha manga but two criticism that is .. first the character's conversation is too formal and serious even when they are having family moments or are just joking... even when Aryan talking to his parents ..it feel like he is talking to his superior in some organization i mean way too much professionalism... AND Second that 70% percent of the dialogues of Aryan is only repeating about that ' this is just the beginning ' , 'British Empire ', 'Independence ', .....I know Independence Arc is ongoing in the novel but no need to add this topics to every single conversations of the characters. Make Aryan invent weapon for BSS and other usefull gadgets for communication or some other purpose. Because if you keep adding Independence topic in every chapter then it will welcome boring to read. And please don't introduce Asuras in this Independence Arc ...introduce them after Independence. One Antagonist at a time, it will give you focus to develop characters of MC and his family and friends and villains too.

author did you get this idea after watching Chaava movie ??

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