Daoist4U0EoL

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2023-10-11 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Daoist4U0EoL
1 months ago
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if your thinking of weapons you should do something like yang from rwby or bete from danmachi to complement the electro/martial artist style you have going or make him a jack of all trades character involving his inventory think Jackie Chan when he uses his environment and objects around him during fighting scenes

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Daoist4U0EoL
3 months ago
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I'm enjoying the read so far but 1 thing I noticed is that some of the action sequence seem repeated especially Ada parts

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Daoist4U0EoL
4 months ago
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just wondering if he is ever gonna do anything with the cp he gets from daily/quest rewards or is it just a throwaway

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Daoist4U0EoL
6 months ago
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think you might have skipped a chapter or 2

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Daoist4U0EoL
8 months ago
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why does Danzo motives come off like he's a standard villager with a lot of power who is ignorant to the world he's a student of the second who has been through 3 great wars Im sure he knows what a jinchuriki is and I'm quite sure he would never openly threaten 1 of the 4 noble clans he would do things behind the scenes to affect the clan/ send a warning