Talio_quin254

I don't get shit that's going on

Bwana you have to be serious the whole cbapter describing how they sat, dude nxt time I'll just wait for you to upload it outside its too much of a waste

You like nerfing the Mc's strength too much then when it comes to his weaknesses you expound on it so much that when he finally wins every thing you throw at him it feel just fake for me, the seal is abit too much sealing every skill while adding only the maximum attributes allowed isn't that contradictory

Don't you guys fear the unknown even a little , hell maybe real

Seven days, its abit too crazy right I mean what is the heart even giving him when it requires such a sustenance, its not equivalent and the dude just took it as it is, i thought it was a one time thing

Notice za nini bana unaboo

The only problem with this book is that its more of a stupid kid forming relationships with every girl he meets and its abit much for someone who wants to enjoythe story but maybe you have your readers

The story itself is too naive i just don't get it or is it just me

Abit cringe but one can get through it eventually

I thought he came back to his world not a different one only the truth was hidden from him