The faces of the Feng family's direct descendants were filled with joy.
Eastern · Jihanam
Well, I will not pretend to praise or anything like that. The novel is written with great precision and skill. There are almost no flaws. It is enjoyable and free of glitches. Continue.
There is a noticeable improvement in the plot and style of the novel compared to the first one. I will continue the novel from now on. Continue.
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Okay , i dont know why the relise is too slow author you have to give us more chapters its one of the highest novels potential ever in this website never read this style before
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I liked your description of the characters and the scenery which makes the story more enjoyable. Good job. I liked your description of the characters and the scenery which makes the story more enjoyable. Good job.
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We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have. We're almost at 50 ch so I wanted to post a review so I can respond to any questions people have.
This story was written well. Although, there were a few instances where commas were used too much in just 1 sentence. I suggest using either an em dash (—) or parentheses when there's an added thought or phrase to a complete sentence. Nonetheless, storytelling is clear and engrossing. I especially like how the author describes a character's physical features, an object's characteristics, and the worldbuilding.
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Clan Building Rising of the Feng Clan
Eastern · Jihanam