Mystiic

Mystiic

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Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Posted

Any questions you would like to ask, ask them here! I'm free to any criticism as long as it's constructive, however, if it's just straight-up slander and hate. It'll be deleted!

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Replied to CulturedUser

I alr know ppl sigh when you enter a room

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Poor Ryoku looked up at her from where he was putting away the food, looking very much like a soaking wet puppy from her perspective. He had been barely 16 when she met him and it had only been 4 years since then after all. He wasn't noticeably younger than her, but she couldn't help but always see him as a bit of a child.

System Breaker of the Shinobi World

System Breaker of the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · JSK_Wilson

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Replied to Sugarsaga

Shikamaru married Temari and because Gaara is her brother, Shikamaru became his brother-in-law.

Hearing Ino say that she looked like one of her friends, Sakura instantly realized who she was talking about. It was Nara Shikamaru, the genius strategist of the Nara clan, who later became the advisor to the Seventh Hokage Uzumaki Naruto and the brother-in-law of the Fifth Kazekage Gaara in the original story.

Naruto: Sakura Blizzard (TL)

Naruto: Sakura Blizzard (TL)

Anime & Comics · DrunkenStar

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Posted

The writing was good, the some of the characters where (OOC-- out of character) so that was a little jarring to read. Some of the stuff was over-exaggerated like the punishment given to Sakura. Somehow she managed to get a harsher punishment than Sasuke when he was a war criminal??? Sasuke's character was written well, honestly the only fanfic I've read in a while that is the most accurate to how he feels about Sakura and doesn't have the writer project how they feel about her onto him-- which is a complete butchering of his character. Sakura's character was written in a way where she would react off of canon, in reality she would never kill Naruto for Sasuke. She didn't kill Karin for Sasuke so why would she kill Naruto? Her morals haven't really changed from OG to Shippuden so that's not an excuse I want to see. But it's a what if, so I don't really care much in that factor. This basically felt like a bashing fic, Kakashi wanted to kill Sakura, Tsunade wanted Sakura to suffer everyday, there's an imaginary Naruto in her head guilt-tripping her cause he doesn't have anything better to do. Yeah, it's very exaggerated. Especially since Sasuke attempted to kill Naruto too, quite literally stabbing his hand through his chest to do so, and yet there's no character in Naruto literally seething and wanting to torture him forever because of the fact that he tried to do it. TWICE, at that. In this fanfic Tsunade also wanted Sasuke's head for betraying the leaf????? I don't get it, lolllll. Other than that, I guess it's pretty good. IF you can ignore the obvious character butchering that is. But there are ways to make dark fics without rewriting peoples characters and personalities as a whole.

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Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Commented

this honestly just felt like a bashing fic for Sakura tbh, how did she manage to get a worse punishment than Sasuke who's a LITERAL war criminal when in the anime he got taken out in just a few months??? make it make sense lolllll

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Replied to Overlord378

bro you read to much fanfic you cant even distinguish it from canon this isnt even true

After Kakashi disappeared all of us were confused. Sasuke on whether he should give his food to Sakura or not, Sakura was filled with guilt when Kakashi told her that she was the most useless in the team while I was just not expecting Sakura to be the one not getting the lunch...but I also liked how Kakashi told her directly this time that she was the most useless rather than making her realize that later. when both Naruto and Sasuke became overpowered.

In Naruto WOrld

In Naruto WOrld

Anime & Comics · Horny_Gentleman

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Commented

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Sakura soon realised that Kakashi mentioned her so after hesitating for a second she started, "My name is Haruno Sakura...my hobby is admiring...S-sasu--kyaaaa...and my goal is to marry h-kyaaaa." Hearing the bashful introduction from Sakura Kakashi was sure diappointed.

In Naruto WOrld

In Naruto WOrld

Anime & Comics · Horny_Gentleman

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Replied to EroFan

facts, especially when she grew out of her good girl falling for bad boy act and genuinely started to love and care for Sasuke during the chunin exams

I'm not gonna move from this seat till the class starts, I don't want my first kiss to be shared with Sasuke. Soon Sakura also arrives and started acting in an annoying manner to make the kid sitting next to Sasuke change seats with her. I moved my gaze around the classroom in search of Hinata but didn't found her...strange.

In Naruto WOrld

In Naruto WOrld

Anime & Comics · Horny_Gentleman

Mystiic
Mystiic
1 years ago
Commented

Genderfluid God RAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Looking at me with an amused look he said "I am neither and both at the same time"

Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Anime & Comics · Josh_Richie

  • In Two Worlds: Sakura’s Dichotomy Amidst Transmigrated Realites original

    In Two Worlds: Sakura’s Dichotomy Amidst Transmigrated Realites

    Anime & Comics SYSTEM MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION SURVIVAL GENIUS ANIME NARUTO FASTPACED SERIOUS IDENTITYEXCHANGE

    Sakura sighs, looking at her disheveled appearance in her mirror. "System, any updates on the temporal paradox detector?" There's a thrill in the air when the System awakens. "Oh, just the usual - saving the universe, forcing your emotions, and keeping Naruto from accidentally summoning a giant toad in the village square." She deadpans. "Let's hope it doesn't fly too close to any unexpected Uchiha Fireballs." _ _ _ In a twist of fate, an indifferent, overpowered Sakura from a world of strength where she has a clan with a dojutsu, finds herself transmigrated into the Chunin Exams in the universe of the original Naruto series. Simultaneously, the emotionally charged Sakura from the original universe is thrust into the realm of OP Naruto and Sasuke, where friendships were never meant to exist and enemies are twice as difficult. As the two Sakura's navigate their unfamiliar surroundings, they must grapple with their new roles – one concealing immense power in a universe unaccustomed to it, and the other surviving in a world where emotions may be her only strength. Battling against destiny, they strive to blend into their new environments, all while safeguarding the delicate balance of the multiverse. _______ What to expect: There isn't an original MC OC, OP Sakura (Overpowered Sakura) is just Sakura from an alternate universe. Just as OP Sakura is stronger than OG Sakura, so are OP Naruto and OP Sasuke, however, their personalities are changed slightly instead of getting crazy power boosts. There's no romance, maybe. I just don't see it being something that needs to be here. No Sakura bashing here, I'd rather be seen dead than put some repetitive, unnecessary slander to her character that just isn't true. The story is in the third perspective from the first seven chapters, then switches between the first and third perspectives from thereon. Speaking on this, the transmigration isn't immediately once the story starts, the first seven chapters are building up the story in OP Sakura's universe to clarify what's happening before she transmigrates to OG Sakura's universe and vice versa.

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  • FF. Femme Fatale: A New VINLAND SAGA Persepective original

    FF. Femme Fatale: A New VINLAND SAGA Persepective

    Anime & Comics DARK SURVIVAL TRAGEDY ANIME HISTORICAL SERIOUS

    Ingiríðr, or Ingrid finds herself as the sole survivor of a devastating attack on her village, orchestrated by her own father who had drugged himself on berserker mushrooms. Fleeing from the aftermath, she encounters the young Thorfinn, and when he begins unknowingly wandering toward her ravaged homeland—Overwhelmed by her emotions and the memories associated with her village, she hastily distances herself from Thorfinn, and later on guilts herself for his presumed death. Left to navigate a world teeming with ruthless Vikings who leave destruction in their wake alone, Ingrid must rely on her own strength to survive. Along her journey, she encounters various individuals who take her under their wing, training her to become as formidable as possible in order to face the harsh realities of the world. They’ll teach her the art of combat, survival skills, and instills in her a strong will to face the harsh realities of the world. Ingrid grew stronger day by day, determined to protect herself and find her own path in this unforgiving realm. FF—Femme Fatale: A New VINLAND SAGA Perspective AO3: 24KSakuya

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