Book_Lady5

A great start to the story and it seems very relatable. The ML putting in more effort is also good. But many bits were very predictable and it has gotten a bit slow now. Please keep up the fast pace of story development. And do tie up loose ends soon. The face slapping needs a bit more power.

An interesting read, with definitely different scenarios. I enjoyed the FL a lot. the rest are just supports. She holds the story well