Author here, this book may be a year old at this point but I have big plans for it in the future, I will upload once a week on Friday at 9:30 exactly
As the Author I must rate this 5 stars, because it is my work. so hello reader I hope you are enjoying the book if you have any questions please ask them I'm very open to answering questions,
Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.
If you have questions ask them on here, I'll respond to them as much as I can without spoiling the story
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So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.
It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters
Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.
As the Authro of this book I’ll ask anyone if they have any questions or suggestions for me if so reply to this comment
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Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice
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so I know that it says this is in WSA 2025 as a competitor, but that was a mistake on my part and my real book for WSA is The Dragon Lords Conquest, which is nothing like this book, but I will upload once a week from 1/7/2025 onwards