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I don’t think reviled is the right word here, cause I think it means they look as though they are about to spit abuse back, but if that’s what you’re going for cool verbiage, but I’m imagining more a taken aback disgust. Like appalled, astonished with disgust If they are reviled, 1 sister would probably have to calm and coax the other. Which kinda happened later, just not obviously. Sorry, I like the word and failed to be concise but I think there are better word to react to his pigheaded perversion.
"Where indeed?" Barnabas mocked. "If you're needing a place to stay, I could find room for two young women to serve my son. Always wanted a pair of young maids, he has." Barnabas's sinister smile made it clear exactly what would be expected. The women both looked reviled as he continued speaking.
Dreamwalker's Bride
Fantasy · TheOtherNoble
Honestly while not super common this happens on the real world, the neighborhood I grew up in had dollar stores and no groceries, my dad bought groceries from a place near his work. The dollar store had smaller portions and were often near or already expired, it was ok for junk food, but terribly unhealthy for groceries. Basically pay more to get less once portion is accounted for and have it be expired and non-nutritious.
The difference between the rich and the poor had escalated in the past few centuries by several folds. Buying groceries was not easy for lower-middle-class citizens. Unlike the rich guys who could get everything brought to them on a single demand, people like Theodore had to come down to the market to buy things. But that wasn't the problem. They actually had to pay more to get inferior quality products.
Conquering Space With My Licking System
Sci-fi · Nr_Yet1208
Cause boys to daydream makes this make a lot more sense
Even though each girl's body was developing, their proportions spoke that each of them will be a top-class beauty in a few years capable of causing countless men to be asleep.
Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
There’s a bunch of comments on this paragraph which made me notice the glace instead of glance, yet none of the comments were about it, so Glace> Glance
Jasmine's long lavender hair which reached up to the waist, Eve with her delicate brownish French braid and Aushima's feathered hair with a touch of cyan, each had their unique charm and their enchanting eyes were enough to capture the heart of all onlookers with a single glace.
Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
I’m not sure if the wayy was on purpose or not but thought I’d just mark it
Only once the fight was over, did Leo realize that he had been fighting wayy more aggressively than usual.
Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Uriel’s demise >chagrin?
At some point, the entity nosferatu vampire that lurked inside the Alamo roared stopping the smaller ones on the spot. Much to Uriel's demise, they started gathering in a single massive group. Just when Uriel thought everything was lost, the sounds of gunshots came from behind and the first row of vampires dropped to the ground like toys that ran out of battery.
Dungeon Raider System
Urban · NanaiSensei
Muzzle
Reality differed quite a lot from that, as the outcome the big bad dog expected never came to happen. What happened instead was Medusa spinning in the air and crossing its nuzzle with a powerful kick that killed it instantly.
Dungeon Raider System
Urban · NanaiSensei
I think close there throats was meant to be something about sneaking, moving and/ or striking silently.
Archers have ranged attacks and flexible skills, this job is filled with power and wisdom. they don't need a strong body, because they needed to travel thousands of miles to track monsters' tracks,they also needed to have intelligent minds to know how to close their throats and make the monsters unable to fight back.
Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)
Games · Fallen_Angelss
Gender pronoun
The number was hanging above her head.
Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)
Games · Fallen_Angelss
Partially 1st person maybe should be him instead of me?
The wolf king's neck suddenly shook, opened his mouth, and roared, and the buffalo-like body suddenly jumped up, and then violently carried me with his hands around his neck.
Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)
Games · Fallen_Angelss
She both so right and so wrong, Perhaps just right but for the wrong reasons
"I look forward to meeting them," Anaisa replied honestly. She needed to know what sort of a family produced this man to have a better chance at understanding him. He was so readable on the surface, but she was convinced he must have some sort of awful flaw or hidden dark side.
Dreamwalker's Bride
Fantasy · TheOtherNoble