Author, you're incredibly talented in ruining your novel😂
"It would be a shame to kill such a beauty."
Fantasy · NihilRuler
I didn't read that far but I liked it
'If you wish to use me... Go ahead, but be prepared to be used in return... Little girl. I will conquer both your mind and body,' Aether resolved with unwavering determination... His pupils flickered with black before settling down to blue.
Fantasy · AbiLIon
Thanks man ,been a while
Your welcome, I can't just stand and do nothing while you waste your time and maybe even money on this trash of a novel, For example(spoiler ahead) Asura's real mother has been once showed in a flashback about how she cruelly left Asura and his father later after some chapters the same flashback repeated and it showed that his mother was crying and apologizing before she left. The Author just casually changed the hole plot and no one complains💀
Her eyes flooded with tears, filled with panic, terror and agony as Asura devoured her while still living, sucking the mana from her body as she turned into ashes before completely vanishing from existence as if Shang Mei never visited him in the first place.
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
my Advice is that you should drop this before you soend too much on it, the inconsistency in this novel is crazy, there was a good Review with a lot the inconsistencies and potholes listed but it got Deleted by the Author maybe.
Her eyes flooded with tears, filled with panic, terror and agony as Asura devoured her while still living, sucking the mana from her body as she turned into ashes before completely vanishing from existence as if Shang Mei never visited him in the first place.
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
Maybe I got confused
"Tsk, What the fuck are they even doing? Fighting? 'Yuck.' They look like children struggling in a fight... Are they even chosen ones? Did Arcane joke around with those jokers?"
Fantasy · AbiLIon
Indeed, I was blinded by Rage.
"Seduction... ah," he mused, contemplating the unfamiliar territory ahead. He had never seduced anyone so he wasn't sure how to do it but still, he determined to see the end of his fucking life!!!
Fantasy · AbiLIon
This novel is a hidden GEM!! Give it a try
This one is my regret in this novel 😔😔 I still have hope tho.
The other was his mother-in-law, Shen Rongfei.
Urban · Li Zhi Man
Thanks for the chapter!! Author please resume this novel🙏 Inreally like it, it has great potential! I still need to see the mc revenge against All ofnthe Walt family! Especially that Rat who influenced his mind during his judgement.
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Fantasy · EG0