Honkai_Lover

Honkai_Lover

male LV 4
2023-06-20 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
ป้าย 7

Moments 510
Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
3 days ago
Commented

What jjk character ability does Ellie get? cosma:

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Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
6 days ago
Commented

The story looks interesting, but I suppose it is an original story and not a translation. Then you would have to correct the way of narration, since everything happens so fast that it seems like a summary of the story, you should put more dialogues between people, thoughts of the protagonist, things that happen around him or some way to lengthen the interaction of the characters between them and the surroundings. Or you can ignore all this, it's just a suggestion.

Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
6 days ago
Commented

tan buenos los capitulos que por más largos que sean, me parecen pocos

Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
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Honkai_Lover
10 days ago
Commented

The story is very interesting, but the parallel world is very confusing along with the stigma, who is supposed to be the person of the stigma and this "mother" of the stigma. Is it a HOF kiana or something like that?

Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
Honkai_Lover
12 days ago
Commented

I think it's the fourth time I've read a similar or the same story, if I believe it's the story I'm telling. Later he gets his own laboratory where he makes many weapons and ends up giving a partner to Otto to cure her since she got sick from Honkai and Otto does not cure her but delays her treatment to be able to manipulate the MC more. someone confirm me.