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I am working on it, the upcoming chapter 13 is with the new writing style, please compromise for 12 chapters 😆 I will change them too.
Thank you for your support yeah it's my first time so I am working on my writing style and in the upcoming chapters you will see improvement for sure 😇
its my first time so in upcoming chapters you we will see improvement anyway thank you for such an honest review 😇
yes its my first time I am still learning, in upcoming chapters you will definitely see improvement 🤩
Henry was inside the house while Asher rushed towards it. When he saw the rock fall on the dining table, Asher fell to the ground, tears streaming down his face. It felt like the end of the world for him. He shouted Henry's name and quickly entered the house through the window of his room. He felt his heart break as he slowly approached the fallen rock. And what did he see? Henry was safe; the rock hadn't hit him, but it had crushed his left hand. Asher, relieved to see Henry alive, felt a surge of hope. But the next challenge was to free Henry's trapped hand from under the rock. He hurriedly moved towards Henry and sat down, talking to him while Henry was barely conscious.
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Fantasy · 0272919
thank you for such an honest review 😇
really! they are just so good mine are not even near to them
Henry was inside the house while Asher rushed towards it. When he saw the rock fall on the dining table, Asher fell to the ground, tears streaming down his face. It felt like the end of the world for him. He shouted Henry's name and quickly entered the house through the window of his room. He felt his heart break as he slowly approached the fallen rock. And what did he see? Henry was safe; the rock hadn't hit him, but it had crushed his left hand. Asher, relieved to see Henry alive, felt a surge of hope. But the next challenge was to free Henry's trapped hand from under the rock. He hurriedly moved towards Henry and sat down, talking to him while Henry was barely conscious.
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Fantasy · 0272919
Bro the start is so awesome, and as you narrated them I can feel all the happenings and your words were forcing me to visualize the scene, welcome bro I have just read ch 1 and I love it 💓💓
Life or Death Game
Horror · kwudu