Well, I guess it’s about time I put a review over here. Five stars as is obligatory. I don’t have much to say but I’m free to ask questions to just comment below and I’ll answer to the best of my ability. Though… other than that I guess I hope you enjoy your read. See y’all later
Sorry to hear that, it was meant to be written in that vague and unsettling way, as it wasn't really meant to be quite as happy. But I didn't intend for it to be hard to read. It was kind of just my natural voice in my head being written. So I'm sorry that brought confusion.
I can see where the confusion comes from as it really isn't explained at all but the subtext is basically a power imbalance. The Lauragne's hold more power than Gabriel's family. This means that say, like a year before this happens, one of the Lauragne's, it could be any noble family too, came and saw how Gabriel could heal all of these wounds with a touch. So they report back and find more information which then leads to the much more powerful family pressuring Gabriel's family into sending him off to be married to their family because they want that asset for their own. That would be the carrot. As for why they just didn't refuse, or why word wouldn't have spread. To address why word didn't spread is becuase cities, especially in an era like this, are very isolated with people rarely, if ever having contact with any other city. This means that word wouldn't spread. As for the former, it would be because Gabriel's family couldn't refuse, they would be destroyed by the superior political power of the Lauragnes and as such it would be more beneficial to send him there rather than to defy and risk destruction. It wasn't too hard of a choice either because they already have an heir in Gabriel's sister. I hope that makes sense. And I do admit that I should have explained that but its a bit too late.
Just a Christmas thing I wrote, doesn’t really have much meaning other than being Christmas themed and cute
Imma mass release tommorow, maybe four or five chapters. I’ve been sick for the past two days so I wasn’t able to write much. But now that I’m better there will be at the very least two chapters a day.
No, it’s more like the poor girl only saw that her father wasn’t responding and thought that he was dead, only he was just very sick and on the verge of death. It’s from her point of view so I just tried to capture what someone would think when they see corpses around and then come back to their house only to see their dad lying on the floor. Of course she would assume the worst.
Yet as the wounds of my father filled his body, sweat falling from his brows only to be healed once more. As father rose once more and gasped.
A Walk Among Stars
Fantasy · SpacesSnips
No? This is just my natural writing, like I do go back and proofread it and all that jazz but I don’t use AI to write. Plus this is a fanfiction so I just write what makes me happy with the work rather than try and make it perfect, and I’m happy with it being flowery that’s my preferred writing style
No problem, I’m going through my backlog of stories and putting out a decent amount of chapters for them. Hope you enjoy the ride for this one.
Yeah, just transferred and rewrote it over on this account
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original My Skills Are All Max-Level
It was originally a game, made to be as realistic as possible with features to match. But as time passed and the game progressed there was no doubt about it. The game encroached upon reality. Not in the traditional sense, that the same monsters and people we had come to know so intimately started to appear in reality. But blank spaces that swallowed the country... the continent. And any that attempted to even reach a finger within those blank spaces of reality were consumed alongside it. I had thought myself average, that I could make some money with this game. Sanctuary. But there was a problem - a boon - whenever I gained a skill, it became max level. There was no exception. So, when the world started to fall apart, and my prowess revealed… They hailed me a hero. Despite the wrongdoings and plundering I had done in the name of wealth and power, they looked to me. To solve their problems and save the world. But could I do it? Demons and beings of absolute power. Such that even my cheat made it only marginally easier. I had no choice. It was either I fought and won, or I cowered and let the world be consumed by the cold devouring void. And so, I fight; from a beginning filled with greed, to a future filled with the hopes and wishes of mankind. Can I do it? "Heh~" Of course I can.170 Chs 891 คอลเลกชัน
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Archer of Green
A god's whim, was it for entertainment, was it for some rare enjoyment in their immortal lives. Whatever it was mattered not, as in death there was life. An awakening towards a journey. To the end of the dungeon, an end of a path. Given a partner, all in the game of this god. Cruel, apathetic, angelic, I don't believe any of these fit the being, the god. After all, I was given a new life, a partner to call my own. And so, I believe whether this was cruel or not is up to me. But as Atalanta reached for my hand, broke through that darkness's hold over my mind. It was only then that it truly begun. This adventure, all on a god's whim.8 Chs 462 คอลเลกชัน
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Reincarnated with a Fusion System
.[Fusing...] The world gained mana, when and how that happened no one knew. But in the aftermath came the appearance of towers. Places where monsters rushed from in order to conquer humanity as it was known. Yet that was not the end, as years later, after countless deaths and sacrifices peace was restored. Schools were made in order to educate the next generation of hunters, those that would climb the towers and save humanity a second time should it be needed. [10%] But that was for those who were talented, for the hundreds of thousands that had the grit and talent to be chosen and climb through the ranks. [30%] That was not me, a talentless reincarnate, one who had less mana than even a baby. Yet even so I still tried, thrived in my studies where in combat I could not. [50%] ... ... [100%] [Welcome to the fusion system, a place where everything and anything can be fused. Your destiny is now your own. Take it and make history, fuse and create, for that is your purpose.]32 Chs 299 คอลเลกชัน
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A Trap in a Lewd Dungeon
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I died. That's obvious. But I was reborn. How? Don't ask me. Maybe it was some god. A divine being? Ah- It doesn't matter. My life burned away and now- well I'm stuck here in this black void. This dungeon. Maybe I had lived a pious last life. Laughable as that was. But I was given a second chance. Told to grow my dungeon, to create hulking monstrosities that would destroy the world. In short, I am now a villain. I am the consciousness of the dungeon, the little orb at the end my body. And still I live. A projection of a body is created - a trap - and I am that. I am the one to guide foolish adventurers to their death. My looks are curated. Soft features that entrap the mind. I am the dungeon. I am the projection, I am human, and I am the dungeon. And I will conquer all. Every being will bow before my might. "Before you're cuteness~" Ah- heh- that too... help... I didn't ask to look this cute!233 Chs 8k คอลเลกชัน
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Genius Beast; Reincarnated Master
“I can copy all of these arts?!” Any and all arts, whether they be the best of the best, or the worst of the worst. He was able to copy them all. For he was a genius of the highest order. A beast that could copy every technique and cultivation art that he came across. Of course when Delphine saw this... "I thought I was the main character" It was because she was reincarnated. Delphine had traveled back in time and to a new, more talented body, only to raise a beast that could do whatever she did, just better. "I'm just that good~" He was also just too smug about it. .... A reincarnated master, and a beast that surpasses even the talents of that very reincarnated master cultivator.24 Chs 41 คอลเลกชัน
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A Walk Among Stars
Would you give your sight... the very essence of that sense of yours...? So that never again would you be able to see again. For the simple ability to heal. Take upon the injuries of those you care for. As with a single touch. They shall be healed. Whether it be a broken limb... a bruise... or even a whole arm... nothing, not a single thing within your grasp will ever be broken. Yet when I opened my eyes... it was not the kaleidoscope of colors I knew the world as... nor the exuberant face of my sister. No, it was to this empty void. Filled only by my sense of touch. "Of course" There was no other answer that would satisfy my will. For this was my choice... and my choice alone. ... When the world was created... populated by species upon species of beings. Yet a drop here... a star that may have yet to burst. A small flap of some God's coat. For the world was given life. Life greater than others. For they could use magic. An ability so wondrous that many nations had been created and felled in the harrowed halls of libraries. Yet this ability was not equal, and neither was the strength of will. For it appeared within women, every man that was born... for every one of them, there was an equal thousand women. As for magic. A rare occurrence already, made even more rare by the gap. A change in dynamic. For there was not some great king... there was not one holy emperor. Or even a god. There was a queen... a holy empress.... a Goddess. For man's place was not on the battlefield but upon the soft ballrooms, kitchens laden with instruments of creation rather than destruction. Married into well families that cared for them like precious possessions.78 Chs 268 คอลเลกชัน
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Be Yourself, Unless you can be a Dragon
People have always told me to be myself. There was no fault in being my true self, but really, when given the chance to be a dragon. Who would refuse. After all, if I can be a dragon, then there was no doubt that I would choose such. As everyone else should as well. Though that didn't explain why I was treated like some sort of demon god. I mean I am and always will be a dragon now. So why is it that everyone in this world has such a bias against dragons. What, did they like slaughter a whole continent or something. Either way, I was a dragon now, and that was all that mattered. I would grow my hoard, take all the treasures in the world and retire to sit on my gold. Yeah, that would be the life.10 Chs 29 คอลเลกชัน
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Return of the Strongest Angel
"Are you sure you can beat this game?" It was a question quite commonly asked of Gabriel, all of his friends and family were worried for him. All because of his obsession with this game of his. They knew of its hellish difficulty and were worried it might consume his life. But Gabriel was not, as even with doubts coming from every person he talked to, he still persevered. And finally, after so many years of playing, Gabriel did it, he beat the game. But that was not the end, a cryptic trait, one that foretold something. And as of the next day it was finally revealed. Not only was he pulled into the game, but it was turned into reality, his stats, his hard earned character. It was all gone. But this did not deter Gabriel. All he did was smile, grasp the stars in the night sky. "I will conquer this again." There was no doubt in his mind, for he had done it once, and even if this was reality now, the whole world taken to this hellish tower, there was no doubt that he would beat it, after all he had already done it once. What was a second time.42 Chs 143 คอลเลกชัน
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Gun Beats Magic
The smell of freshly lit gunpowder in the morning, spent in several rounds and completely decimating the dummy that I had placed up. Ah, isn't that just the best smell in the world. But of course there had to be a caveat as with a flash of light I found myself transported to somewhere. And told that I had to defend this new place all for my kingdom. As a red blooded American, at least in spirit, I couldn't really call myself one in blood cause well I mean I wasn't really one anymore. But that was all in the past, literally, as I had hundreds of undead to fight, hundreds of monsters to test my guns out on. Ah, if only these two others would be a little better, then it would be heaven.1 Chs 4 คอลเลกชัน
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PURE Human
PURE, a game that took the world by storm. But not only in the way that one thought of it. It was the leading VR game of its time. And for years after its development it stayed that way. Until one day when it became reality. Or to the players of the time, when it retook reality. Most thought that it was merely a magical phenomenon that took them to the world of PURE. But to the truly informed it was a competition that had reclaimed Earth and its inhabitants. The period in which it was a VR game was only a tutorial and meant only to reacquant us with its systems. Yet even as they competed for territory and power from other races it was conflict between the humans that brought us to now. To the time when two people were sent back in time. A fierce competition and battle had led one to suicide for another and the other to desperately kill said another. But unknown to both they were sent back in time. One wanted to rule the game, the competition and the other simply wanted to save her friend. But this is a story of neither of them, it is a story of the friend. Of the talent of mankind. The savior and greatest genius that mankind had birthed and his story of navigating the regressed enemies and friends.1 Chs 10 คอลเลกชัน
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Necrodermis
A world of knowledge… no even more than that, a whole universe of knowledge one taken from the supreme rulers of said universe. Granted knowledge of the immortal Necrons, the ruler of the galaxy. …. Check out my novel In Memoria, I focus more on that than h this as this fanfiction is more of a passion project than anything serious.4 Chs 60 คอลเลกชัน
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In Memoria
When I think of the greatest blade I don’t think of one that can cut anything, no I think of one that could cut through the very fate and destiny of the world, one that could cut through the bonds of time. A tower, one that had consumed earth and its inhabitants. Filled with magic and opportunities, one that may just give me the chance to create the greatest blade, the one that I had dreamed of for so long.76 Chs 78 คอลเลกชัน
Yeah, I kind of imagined it as the elf’s disdain for the other races that manifested in him calling her both beautiful with his “you of all people” and insulting her by calling her profession barbaric. I’ve always thought of the elves as, except for the rare few, an arrogant race that thinks they are the best cause their so close to nature or whatnot, so I tried to capture that with double layered insults along with also giving him a bit of humanization with an attraction to beauty. Though I can see how it can cause confusion.
"Why you of all people would need something so… barbaric… I cannot hope to know."
Archer of Green
Anime & Comics · SpacesSnips