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I'm not going to lie I agree that these early chapters are really bad ;/ It was my first time writing a bit and I didn't really know what I was doing nor a real plan. Im actually reworking the entire book right now and rewriting all of the early chapters. Sorry for the disappointment
ch 0 4 The Awakening of the Prince
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Don't worry... I feel the same if im being honest so I have something else planned for her
Chouchou - (images)
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Yes she is but he's needed for blackening. That's why I asked in a poll if Erza should be his daughter
Soon, they entered her bedroom, sitting in a small lounge. Knowing where this was going, Irene loosened the strap to her clothes.
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Like I said I had planned it both ways and I personally leaned towards erza being his daughter. I see some books do polls at the end of the chapters and only 1 person answers so its gratifying to have done many polls in this book and have all of them responded to with enthusiasm. Thats why I always want to ask your opinions and especially and a big point like a daughter. :)
If you couldn't tell already, the matriarch of the clan is going to be Irene. I'm going to have her be married to the one king because it involves her corruption, but I can have it where she only had sex once and happened to be pregnant, or I can make it so that she gives her first-time Menma and she gets pregnant.
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I don't know why you bothered to read then... It legit said in the description that it was going to have mind control and brainwashing...
Another big thing, as I know, people will ask. I'm not going to do any clone stuff. The original I'm basing it on did, but I'm not into it. If it were me, it would feel like I'm getting cucked...
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Im not but Ill have to check it out if we are similar
ch 34 Celebration
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No it's Ino
(Spoiler --- Boruto is getting NTR'd for sure...)
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Franceska Mila Rose from bleach
"You're going with Yoruichi, and that's final, Franceska!" the Raikage exclaimed, firmly curtailing the black-haired girl's thoughts. "My decision stands!"
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No i'll just make the clone Hanabi disappear like the Mikoto clone that was burned
"Very good... We will take advantage of this just like we did with the Uchiha massacre..." Menma said with a smirk growing on his face.
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She's not in this. It's AU....
Himawari - (images)
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I'm kinda debating what age I want to have her atm. It's mainly to fit the flow of the story without them being to young as I don't want 12-8 year old's like the original. So I need to give plausible ages that fit and flow with the story so I will decide soon and display it in an upcoming chapter.
ch 30 The Miracle
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I've done both and personally I felt that I couldn't enjoy it as much. Something about blood all over and having to constantly stop to reassure and check on her took a lot out of it. It's a preference thing. I know some people are really into it but it's not so much for me.
Although Factory New in real life is annoying to start with, it's better in this situation where I have the ability to avoid describing fucking blood on my sheets...
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No, she is a virgin. I guess I worded it wrong, but I meant that she pulled her shirt down a bit or flirted with him. I might go back and change it as it is easy to misunderstand rereading it.
Throughout her brother's life, she fully kept her word. She taught him a lot about Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu, in addition to that when he graduated and became a Genin, she got to the point of seducing and surrendering to her friend, the Gama-Sennin Jiraiya, only for him to agree to be the blonde's Jonin Sensei.
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I thought of this, but he needed to have physical evidence as without that, it would mean he would have to genjutsu teachers, other students, and most likely the anbu watching him due to him being Jinchuriki
The Uzumaki prince was calm with his feigned injuries but decided to play along. Then the blond Hyuga pushed Menma with his shoulder, immediately getting annoyed and blaming his half-brother for bumping into him when he had clear intention of hitting him.
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Yeah, I felt the same, but I wanted to lay out the story. If this is going to be a long-lasting fic I didn't want to rush it to much
Eight years had passed, and he was now Sixteen years old. During this time, a lot had happened.
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Itachi and Sasuke are not brothers within this AU. Sasuke is Mikoto's brother so Sasuke is actually Itachi's uncle in this.
It was Sakura Haruno, Tsunade's most advanced student when it came to Medical Ninjutsu. She was one of the most renowned Kunoichi in the village and a partner of Sasuke Uchiha, who was considered one of the most powerful Ninjas in the world.
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This is a joke before I get some comments.... lol
(I have trademarked the name Diablo. I can assure you that nobody has ever used the name Diablo for a demon. Any proof otherwise is fabricated and/or copied. Please report to me if you find any, as they are using it without my permission.)
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