Truly sorry about the inconsistencies, Name them if you would and I will correct them in no time, Besides, thanks for ur review!
sorry for the mistake but he is a man
Elowen gritted his teeth, his vision growing increasingly blurry, his breathing rapid.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
wield, it is shown on my device
you couldn't find it?
sorry for the mistake, Elowen is a he
Hearing John's words, Elowen lowered his head, a hint of shame flashing in his eyes.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
sorry for that mistake! corrected
I do have read some chinese novels but rest assured this is a 100% origin work of mine.
Just in the test, when it comes to regular potion making, Fara will surly cover the material cost.
But here was this young man, offering to make potions for free and even willing to cover all the material costs!
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Even he throw a dozen daggers in one shot, the goblins are just too out of number. And that won't help.
Even with the LUCK of Kiss and [Hermes Dice] bonuses, John could only kill the goblins one by one.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Overall a good read, and the story has a tight pace, but the powerscaling need to be refined a bit more. I'm also curious if the male and female protagonists will go their separate ways to level up. When will they be able to get married officially?
Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?
Fantasy · Sesame_Cookies