A well-written story that leans heavily into the complex relationships between royalty, personhood, and politics. I look forward to seeing where it goes as the world and the characters develop.
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Seems unnecessary given this sort of phrase came up in the last chapter.
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Get some self-esteem girl! <(; w ;)>
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SFGTMH is a well-written story with a lot of potential. TLDR: I enjoyed it. 13 chapters in, there are a lot of typical guys, but the main character manages to stay refreshing with his dedication to fatherhood and a bit of hyperbole to how he reacts to situations. Setting-wise, I think the world could do with a bit more fleshing out, perhaps during the MCs' next downtime. It's a bit early to comment on character development, but I hope that the daughter especially is shown to change over time as she grows, given her age and the stressors of the situation.
Is everything above meant to be bolded? I feel like it isn't.
He cackled, clearly pleased with his own joke. "Anyway, Frank, you mentioned a military complex. What are we waiting for? Lead the way!"
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
Ah, men. Put two in a room and it's 99% posturing for every 1% of substance.
Finally, Frank let out a long breath and met Arlo's gaze. "Alright," he said, his voice low. "I'm in, but let's make something clear: I do not work for you. I do not take orders from you. If it comes down to completing your mission or saving my parents, I will not hesitate to choose the latter."
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
How To Train Your Dada :P
How to Build a Badass
Fantasy · BossaNovaFlare_1
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Villain Hiring: Help! Author Wants Me Dead
Fantasy · bearateme_