It s great . But i think you should add some romance to the story . But make it slow like your doing with the business building . That would be great
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Urban · Just Like Water
Excellent story and development of the charachter . Finally enjoying a real story that is not repeating the same bs we see in every webnovel
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It s great . But i think you should add some romance to the story . But make it slow like your doing with the business building . That would be great
ch 288 Chapter 248 55 Minutes_1
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Urban · Just Like Water